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Slash_Aeolus
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A small scene.

Post by Slash_Aeolus » Mon May 03, 2010 7:08 pm

Everybody is good.Do a little scene, hope everybody opinion.
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Re: A small scene.

Post by Slash_Aeolus » Tue May 04, 2010 3:27 am

Why is everyone don't talk?

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Re: A small scene.

Post by galinette » Tue May 04, 2010 4:05 am

The first thing to improve would be the character's materials. They are too "flat". But its geometry seems very good. Which soft was used to generate it?

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Re: A small scene.

Post by Pibuz » Tue May 04, 2010 4:58 am

Hi Slash!
Sorry for the late reply: I took a glimpse but had no time to answer!
I think the lighting is good, the best combinations are #3, then #1, in my opinion.
The silk is a very good material, and the scene is interesting itself: as Galinette suggests, I think the character's mats are to be improved a lot, mostly eyes and skin, but also the hair..

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Re: A small scene.

Post by waz » Tue May 04, 2010 5:50 am

Hi!
Nice render :)
I agree with what others have said about the character.
The edges of the walls are too flat.
For me # 3 is the best.

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Re: A small scene.

Post by benn » Tue May 04, 2010 10:32 am

I think the skin material needs to be different. There are some skin materials in the material database..

http://www.indigorenderer.com/materials ... rch?q=skin

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Re: A small scene.

Post by Slash_Aeolus » Tue May 04, 2010 3:22 pm

Hey, guys.
Thank everybody to my suggestion.Thank you for helping me.I will try to do every picture.Thank you ,I love you

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