Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by **fused** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:52 pm

nice!

how did you do the mountain shader?

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:55 pm

Thanks

Well there is some image maps, blended with some gradients to decide where what it going to appare, and exponent map for the snow of course, and bump map

Can be quite usefull

djegoo · Post by **djegoo** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:36 am

oh ! my!! your images are so simple but so simply convincing.
how long did the water render? on my computer, it is always very long to start being clear so i am very impressed because you post so often interesting images, techniques etc...
in order to fasten my renders, i reduce water refraction i noticed. less realistic but not that shocking.

CTZn · Post by **CTZn** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 6:30 am

Stromberg wrote:Thanks
Well there is some image maps, blended with some gradients to decide where what it going to appare, and exponent map for the snow of course, and bump map
Can be quite usefull

Looking good !

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 12:53 pm

CTZn: Thanks, hopefully there will be some more renders that will fall in taste

djegoo: Thanks

I did render 3 images at the same time(all the ones with water) for 9 hours, but it didnt need to render that long

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:38 pm

: Shattered_Glass.jpg (118.47 KiB) Viewed 3729 times

zeitmeister · Post by **zeitmeister** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 1:55 am

Wow! Subtle motionblur would be great... love it!

Post by **fused** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:08 am

Sweet rendering, Stromberg!

the glass rim looks like drinking out of it will leave you scarred for life

Nick · Post by **Nick** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:17 am

Congratualtion Stromberg, i like it

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:19 am

Nick: Thanks

zeitmeister: Glad you liked it

I might render it again with some motion blur on

Fused: Thanks, and i think i forgott to bevel the rim actualy, so you might not want to touch the rim when drinking

Post by **OnoSendai** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:35 pm

Very cool glass render Stromberg.

dakiru · Post by **dakiru** » Sun Aug 23, 2009 3:22 am

Wow! beautiful!!!

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:35 pm

Ono: Thanks

dakiru: Glad you like it

I was not planning to show this render before it was 100 & done, but i want to have some critics early one

: Old_Street.jpg (212.38 KiB) Viewed 3503 times

Post by **OnoSendai** » Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:39 pm

Wow, very nice render!
some crits:
* Hanging power line and broken building in center/back need more polies.
* Metal panels on ground need a dirtier material
* ground texture tiles a bit behind metal panels.

Nice stuff!

doublez · Post by **doublez** » Mon Aug 24, 2009 2:07 pm

Great start!
I agree with all that ono said and I have a few things to add.
-I didn't immediately make out what was laying in the middle on the ground. If they are metal they should be roughened up and maybe rusty.
-The brick wall on the left looks a bit flat compared to the rock walls on the right (you can also see the brick texture repeat).
-One of the lines looks like it runs straight into a wall, while the others don't. It just looks out of place to me (kinda of nitpicky, but it's just something I noticed)

Are the hanging clothes in the background modeled or textures? Either way, they look pretty good.

Other than that it's looking good

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