My scene from the last Evermotion comp

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My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by suvakas » Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:41 am

Hey,
I thought I'll post my Evermotion scene here too. It's from their last competition. I never had time to finish it so it's in very unfinished state.
Anyway, comments are welcome as always.

Ps. No post pro has been made, those are directly from Indigo. :wink:
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by Borgleader » Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:43 am

Nice stuff :)
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by Godzilla » Sun Jun 21, 2009 11:00 am

Beautiful renders. The DOF in all of them is great. I can never get mine to behave correctly... do you have any tips? :?

My only real critique is that the texture on the wall and the phone box in the 3rd aren't quite suitable for a close-up shot, and the phone seems to be slightly out of proportion to the rest of the scene. Other than that the renders seem perfect. Very nice work.


PS. is the distortion on the water just a bump map? :|
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by suvakas » Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:50 pm

Thanks guys,

Don't know. I like the wall texture near the phone (a bit too low texture on the 2nd image though). But yeah, the scene has some scale issues I didn't bother to fix.
Water is bump maped.
DOF tips? Well.. Indigo camera acts like a real camera. DOF depends on your scene scale and F-stop settings. Also you may want to turn off "auto focus" when focusing on something specific in Indigo scene. But there really is nothing more to tell about it. :)
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by Camox » Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:40 am

Nice to see other evermotion contest renders with indigo. The first picture looks great. Cool stuff suv ! :D
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by Stur » Mon Jun 22, 2009 9:33 am

Apart from the huge phone, the renders (specially the first) are very cool.
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by Stromberg » Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:27 am

This looks very good, you did send it to the render challenge i hope? :)
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by suvakas » Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:35 am

Thanks guys !
Stromberg wrote:This looks very good, you did send it to the render challenge i hope? :)
Yes, I did. :D
It was very unfinished like this. I had a lot more stuff planned for this image, but didn't have enough free time. But still, it was fun.
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by tungee » Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:08 pm

Very Nive and a very nice retro theme!
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by Conceptual Architect » Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:52 am

tungee wrote:Very Nive and a very nice retro theme!

Yes, I agree. Nice work Suvakas. :)
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by tungee » Thu Jun 25, 2009 7:39 am

Hi suvakas, i have a question:
Is this Tallinn in Olympic logo?
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by suvakas » Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:02 am

tungee wrote:Hi suvakas, i have a question:
Is this Tallinn in Olympic logo?
Yeah, it's Tallinn.
It's the current logo of Tallinn (capital of Estonia). Nothing like that was used in 1980. It's all my imagination. :)
But Tallinn really had a part in 1980 USSR Olympic games though. The sailing competitions where held in Tallinn.
I went retro with the model cause the building reminded me the old Soviet architecture for some reason.
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by tungee » Thu Jun 25, 2009 7:18 pm

Ok Thank you for the clarification + bonus information!
It reminded me also the late 1980 Touristic architetcture in former Jugoslavia..
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by zeitmeister » Thu Jun 25, 2009 7:25 pm

Great work!
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Re: My scene from the last Evermotion comp

Post by CoolColJ » Fri Jul 24, 2009 7:44 pm

Looks very realistic, especially the first 2 pics
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