My First Work

krilosax · Post by **krilosax** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:25 am

Hi:

this is my first work in blender and indigo, what do you think????.
please give me some advice.

thanks

Vanessa07 · Post by **Vanessa07** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 8:17 am

Very good start and welcome

1) You can bevel some edges
2) Material are clean, maybe the square on the ground are too large
3) You can use a photo for the outside

that's all for me

krilosax · Post by **krilosax** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 4:51 pm

thanks,

fix the ground is easy, an uv tex in albedo for the wood in cabinets.

but i don´t understan where you want bevel, the refrigerator??

Vanessa07 · Post by **Vanessa07** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:49 pm

Maybe these one

BbB · Post by **BbB** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:56 pm

And fill the place with junk!

Zom-B · Post by **Zom-B** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 8:15 pm

nice image... but your fridge seems way to width compared to the oven for example...

Plz do your next render a little bigger, so we can actually see if something needs some bevel

BbB · Post by **BbB** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 9:34 pm

I've seen such a fridge at my brother-in-law's place in Providence, RI. Never underestimate the size of US fridges.

Marcofly · Post by **Marcofly** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 9:43 pm

Welcome!!
It's not a fridge, it's the safe-depository!

Ciao!!

BbB · Post by **BbB** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 9:51 pm

It's the hummer version.

krilosax · Post by **krilosax** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 11:00 pm

jajaja, its for all a cow.

you´re right

Vampyre · Post by **Vampyre** » Fri Feb 08, 2008 1:01 am

it looks great so far, but the tiles on the floor seem a bit large. I'm sure tiles that large exist, but they make the scene look miniature to me. also, the ceiling and the wall look like they are the same color, which is rarely the case in real life. your off to an excelent start, keep up the great work

kwez · Post by **kwez** » Sat Feb 09, 2008 5:41 am

wow ! very nice.
as others mentioned, some size problems maybe !?

the oven I think is to small, not just in comparison to the fridge !
compared to the sink & large tiles etc,

it looks like it could almost fit inside the 'cupboards' (??) under the sink.

again, very nice, I wish I create such a nice scene.

crojack · Post by **crojack** » Sat Feb 09, 2008 5:52 am

stick a sub-zero in there!

krilosax · Post by **krilosax** » Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:18 am

hi: very thanks to everybody for suggestions.
i tried to fix but still have details and need more tips. thanks

Vampyre · Post by **Vampyre** » Mon Feb 11, 2008 5:35 am

it looks good.
i like the detail work, but the scale of everything still seems a bit off, i guess i should ask, what country is this kitchen from?

I really like the way the new angle allows light to bounce off the floor and fridge.

Oh i think i know whats catching my eye. it looks like the camera is up near the ceiling, i can almost see the top of the fridge

the only other suggestion i have is to check your white balance, and maybe make the image a bit warmer/redder. thats just a personal preference though.

keep up the great work, i hope your enjoying indigo as much as i do.

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