Hi guys !!!
This is the rear facade of my latest project. Some days ago i posted the main facade and...i hope this one is better than the other one.
Cheers.
The modern rear facade
Re: The modern rear facade
Sure it is.
Paradoxically, I feel like the architecture is "blocking" the view
I suggest you give it a little more "room" to make it breathe.
It would come out much more..calm!
Paradoxically, I feel like the architecture is "blocking" the view
I suggest you give it a little more "room" to make it breathe.
It would come out much more..calm!
Re: The modern rear facade
While I haven't seen the last one, I am at one with Pibuz concerning the "air" the building needs to manifest itself. Few things I would play with (matter of taste):
- watermark could be 20% of it's size now, and just 40% transparent, so it's barely visible but readable, perhaps even rotated vertically being sticked to the edge of the image - just the way it doesn't confront the hero of the show. A subtle fingerprint is better than a massive scar
- I feel a bit of disharmony in saturation/lighting situation of the object versus the environment, especially the bottom-right part of the image.
- that half-of-the-car doesn't seem to add detail, instead making it "dirtier", but hey, that really could be just me.
- watermark could be 20% of it's size now, and just 40% transparent, so it's barely visible but readable, perhaps even rotated vertically being sticked to the edge of the image - just the way it doesn't confront the hero of the show. A subtle fingerprint is better than a massive scar
- I feel a bit of disharmony in saturation/lighting situation of the object versus the environment, especially the bottom-right part of the image.
- that half-of-the-car doesn't seem to add detail, instead making it "dirtier", but hey, that really could be just me.
Re: The modern rear facade
Hi Pibuz.Pibuz wrote:Sure it is.
Paradoxically, I feel like the architecture is "blocking" the view
I suggest you give it a little more "room" to make it breathe.
It would come out much more..calm!
I have the full west right to the facade , that is why i have a full "wall" of wood (sunbreakers) https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/23 ... e868c3.jpg
Re: The modern rear facade
Hi dakiru !!! Thank you for the suggestions, i'll keep them in mid next timedakiru wrote:While I haven't seen the last one, I am at one with Pibuz concerning the "air" the building needs to manifest itself. Few things I would play with (matter of taste):
- watermark could be 20% of it's size now, and just 40% transparent, so it's barely visible but readable, perhaps even rotated vertically being sticked to the edge of the image - just the way it doesn't confront the hero of the show. A subtle fingerprint is better than a massive scar
- I feel a bit of disharmony in saturation/lighting situation of the object versus the environment, especially the bottom-right part of the image.
- that half-of-the-car doesn't seem to add detail, instead making it "dirtier", but hey, that really could be just me.
This is the main facade of this project.
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Re: The modern rear facade
Very cool architecture!
Perhaps the "chocolate side" of the house could get a little more "love" (=light)?
Perhaps the "chocolate side" of the house could get a little more "love" (=light)?
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