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Straw bales final

Post by zeitmeister » Wed Aug 15, 2012 1:38 am

Hope you like it!
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Cheers, David



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Re: Straw bales final

Post by Voytech » Wed Aug 15, 2012 2:08 am

That is really cool David. The leaves are a bit distracting though... maybe desaturate them a bit?

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Re: Straw bales final

Post by Polinalkrimizei » Wed Aug 15, 2012 6:06 am

Damn right we like it.
Perfectly fits the season :)

And now to the gallery!!

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Re: Straw bales final

Post by ritter » Wed Aug 15, 2012 6:47 am

Moin Zeiti

Gefällt mir sehr gut, einzigster Kritikpunkt sind die Eichenblätter im Vordergrund.

Strohballen sind perfekt.

Gruß Axel

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Re: Straw bales final

Post by zeitmeister » Wed Aug 15, 2012 8:04 pm

Thank you very much!
Meanwhile, the foreground twigs are bugging me, too... a lot.
I'm gonna make an update without these.. they really suck, you're absolutely right.
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Re: Straw bales final

Post by CTZn » Wed Aug 15, 2012 11:15 pm

Yes ritter is right, the straw bales are perfect !
obsolete asset

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Re: Straw bales final

Post by Godzilla » Thu Aug 16, 2012 12:44 pm

Beautiful work :)
zeitmeister wrote:Thank you very much!
the foreground twigs are bugging me, too... a lot.
I have to agree.. seems like an odd place for a tree to be anyways. I look forward to seeing the new version!
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Re: Straw bales final

Post by zeitmeister » Fri Aug 17, 2012 3:57 am

... removed.
Better?
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Re: Straw bales final

Post by cotty » Fri Aug 17, 2012 4:03 am

YES 8)
little gallery... http://unverzagt.biz/cottysgallery/

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Re: Straw bales final

Post by ritter » Fri Aug 17, 2012 5:45 am

zeitmeister wrote:... removed.
Better?
heuballen-test_14_beautypass_1600.jpg
Much better !

Affengeil ....so kenn ich die Strohballen des Taunus.

Gruß Axel
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Post by OnoSendai » Fri Aug 17, 2012 5:48 am

nice!

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Re: Straw bales final

Post by Pibuz » Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:12 pm

Yes Zeitmaster, very very nice!!
I liked the attempt to introduce a sort of a out-of-focus foreground to the scene, although it was clearly too big..Maybe introducing a smaller detail....

Have you thought anything about the distant background? I don't know, some yellow trees, a barn...

I really like your saturated skies, btw! Are they the real lightsource (EXR map) or just a postpro-added background?

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Re: Straw bales final

Post by zeitmeister » Fri Aug 17, 2012 10:33 pm

Thank you very much!
Placing something in the foreground was the intention, but I think that vegetation is the wrong idea here.
Maybe something related to hay or agriculture in general... but at the moment I've got no idea.
I rendered a simple backplate into the image, but masked it out again in PS to have more control over colour and tonemapping.
Lighting is simple sunksy.

Indeed, I have some kind of background landscape, but I am not very happy with it... the perspective is very low, either.

Currently I am reworking the foil to a real double-sided SSS material; maybe I will change the background to the one with a little more landcape.

Thanky again for your tips and critics!
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Re: Straw bales final

Post by Voytech » Sat Aug 18, 2012 12:27 am

zeitmeister wrote:Thank you very much!
Placing something in the foreground was the intention, but I think that vegetation is the wrong idea here.
Maybe something related to hay or agriculture in general... but at the moment I've got no idea.
I rendered a simple backplate into the image, but masked it out again in PS to have more control over colour and tonemapping.
Lighting is simple sunksy.

Indeed, I have some kind of background landscape, but I am not very happy with it... the perspective is very low, either.

Currently I am reworking the foil to a real double-sided SSS material; maybe I will change the background to the one with a little more landcape.

Thanky again for your tips and critics!
A pitchfork stuck into the ground! :) Or a tractor/harvester wheel (may be too much though).

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Straw bales final

Post by zeitmeister » Sat Aug 18, 2012 6:52 am

But nice ideas!
Maybe I can combine it with elements from my old country road setting...
new scene for that. :-)

I'll rework the foil an the general quality, and then it has to be enough for a formaly short test. :-)

Thank you again!
Cheers, David



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