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Rendered for half an hour. I'll let it render until it's either clear or I find something to change (which I most certainly will). Still undecided if I want the fork to be lying on the table or the "someone behind the camera holds it up" way I have it now. Table decorations, texture and mybe a background are still to be done of course.
Comments and critiques appreciated.
I think it would be even creepier if the fork hadn't actually pierced the eye yet, just squashing the eye right before it breaks the surface. Also maybe have the iris rotated a little more towards the camera. Lastly maybe have the reflection from the eye show a scene of something, like a person or something. I suppose for the scene reflection it would be better having the eye closer to the camera so it was bigger.
I like this style of 3D art
"To be, or not to be" That is a question?
My Ideas are:skypa wrote:You guys think it'll be to bleak if I let it blank?
I don't think you should pump more "extras" in your Scene,
this only would take the Focus from the "eye forking action"
put the Camera just a little higher, viewing down on the scene,
so you don't have such a blank Background.
Try to illuminate the Scene by the Kitchen HDRI,
and perhaps try some kind of table cloth like this,
with some good bump this could look very cool...
(white, or little yellowish table cloth, not 100%perfect Flat, with this Bumb could be nice too!
Also try to raise your DOF setting to Focus more on the action...
Perhaps the glasses could be removed to...
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