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Cheesecake

Post by MSUdom5 » Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:29 pm

I've started a project which will force me to learn texturing. I was inspired by BbB's pastry project, and decided to try to make cheesecake. I'm working on the cake itself right now. I plan to add toppings (strawberries or chocolate), a cake slicer, and put it on some type of dish. I really don't have a specific direction, so I would appreciate comments and suggestions. :)
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Post by eman7613 » Wed Sep 10, 2008 4:14 pm

I LOVE cheesecake! I made a completely false move about it om highschool. This project has my full endorcment and hunger...looks so delicious.... :lol:
Yes i know, my spelling sucks

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Post by palawat » Wed Sep 10, 2008 8:54 pm

The cake model and texture looks promising already.

Reduce the floor tiles size a little bit, maybe? It makes the cake looks like... I don't know, too big? Hench the fact that it really makes me hungry :wink:
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Post by pixie » Wed Sep 10, 2008 8:57 pm

If he reduce the floor tiles more the cake would look even bigger! :D Awesome floor, awesome cake... ;)
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Post by palawat » Wed Sep 10, 2008 11:15 pm

You are absolutely right, pixie.

Think I need more sleep. :oops:
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Post by pixie » Wed Sep 10, 2008 11:18 pm

@MSUdom5:
Would you mind sharing the floor material on material's DB, you've got quite something there you know? ;)

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Post by MSUdom5 » Thu Sep 11, 2008 1:26 am

Thanks everyone. :)

Pixie, I can upload the material when I get home from work today. It's nothing special though. I just pulled a jpg from cgtextures.com and made it... erm... tileable.

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Post by pixie » Thu Sep 11, 2008 1:28 am

You're way too humble! ;) Did you displace it? It looks as if it has been...

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Post by MSUdom5 » Thu Sep 11, 2008 1:45 am

Nope, no displacement yet, but I plan on drawing a displacement map soon, before I add to the material db. This version is simply phong with an albedo map.

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Post by pixie » Thu Sep 11, 2008 2:13 am

I decided to make one myself! :)

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Post by MSUdom5 » Thu Sep 11, 2008 2:25 am

Nice. I actually like that one better.

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Post by pixie » Thu Sep 11, 2008 3:14 am

Bu yours feel that has more relief...

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Post by Kram1032 » Thu Sep 11, 2008 8:48 am

palawat wrote:The cake model and texture looks promising already.

Reduce the floor tiles size a little bit, maybe? It makes the cake looks like... I don't know, too big? Hench the fact that it really makes me hungry :wink:
I'd still reduce the tile-size... It's not the cake which looks too big (maybe a little, but that can more efficiently be changed by increasing aperture radius, I guess...) but the tiles are definitely too big, I think...

Great start! :D Looks delicious and promising :)

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Post by CTZn » Thu Sep 11, 2008 9:43 am

Compared to what ? There could be giant tiles, nano-cakes... come on, that's as relative as subjective :)

Good start so far, looks quite creamy. Good for a cheese cake, lookink for topping !

Suggestion ? Erh... put yeti footprints on it ?
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Post by pixie » Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:37 am

Kram1032 wrote:I'd still reduce the tile-size... It's not the cake which looks too big (maybe a little, but that can more efficiently be changed by increasing aperture radius, I guess...) but the tiles are definitely too big, I think...
It's all relative... One cannot say if the tiles are 30cm or 30m, for all it's worth all that matters is relative sizes... The camera could go away, we could enlarge the cake, and it would do the same...

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