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bytter
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by bytter » Mon May 28, 2007 2:04 am
Hi...
Here's the scene I'm playing with...
Care to give any ideas?
Cheers

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ThatDude33
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by ThatDude33 » Mon May 28, 2007 3:49 am
This scene has potential... but I don't like how it's so faceted. You are getting strange refractions because of this.
Suggestions:
Smooth the rose a few times.
Make the petals red glass!

Matt B. >>Maya To Indigo<<

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Kram1032
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by Kram1032 » Mon May 28, 2007 4:52 am
-add stings
- make the lower part greenish
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daniel_nieto
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by daniel_nieto » Mon May 28, 2007 3:46 pm
nothing to add, besides the things already said by thatdude and the other dude, hahaha krammyboy! looks nice btw...i think you should add some edgesplit so the black areas dissapear... but looks good. does it have cbc?

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joegiampaoli
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by joegiampaoli » Mon May 28, 2007 6:14 pm
The only place that should be left faceted is the joint between the flower and stem, that gives it that "cut jewel", looks Nice.
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CTZn
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by CTZn » Mon May 28, 2007 10:39 pm
IMHO Daniel's advice is the best for now, as I find that the sharpness of the petals is good because the rose is supposed to be artificial...
But as Daniel stated, there may be some normal issues... do you know how to manage them (you should know now, if you use blender) ?
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