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Rafaello
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by Rafaello » Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:07 pm
Hope you like it, this took 2 and a half hours, but still rendering.
Crits are welcome
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dakiru

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by dakiru » Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:16 pm
The sax is great. Did you model it?

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Rafaello
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by Rafaello » Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:52 pm
Hi dakiru, no I didn't, found it in the net
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dakiru

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by dakiru » Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:02 pm
Rafaello wrote:Hi dakiru, no I didn't, found it in the net
Nevertheless the render is great.

The only crit is the hat - seems to be a lot less realistic than the sax. And the difference in saturation between the environment and models. Plus DOF would score here.
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Jambert

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by Jambert » Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:34 am
It's nice, I agree with Dakiru, +1 for DOF
You should blend your material to get something a bit older, it looks too clean for a street

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Rafaello
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by Rafaello » Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:38 am
Thanks guys, will implement your sugestions
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Meelis
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by Meelis » Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:07 am
Looks like new saxophone. But if u want a bit older look then brass should have black oxide.
But not that old, just a slight variation.
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Rafaello
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by Rafaello » Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:03 am
Thanks Meelis I've been working on it, but had a problem with the computer.
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