A kitchen scene

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A kitchen scene

Post by suvakas » Sun Sep 27, 2009 10:49 am

Hey,
I started working on a kitchen scene. Just for fun.
Not sure if I will ever finish it though.

Comments are welcome...
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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Stinkie » Sun Sep 27, 2009 10:59 am

Really like the third one. :!:

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Sparlin » Sun Sep 27, 2009 11:55 am

Holy cow, I honestly thought that the last image was a reference photo!

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Godzilla » Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:09 pm

Last image is very realistic, you just need to work on a few of the current details & add more details.

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by neo0. » Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:50 pm

Much better than I could ever too.. The last one looks really good, but two crits :
1) The texture around the knobs is pretty bleary
2) The lighting looks a little wierd. Almost like there is too much contrast between the oven and the burners on top.. In my opinion, it kind of makes it look like the burners are floating..

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Pibuz » Sun Sep 27, 2009 9:33 pm

Well Suv!
I really like the first one, indeed!

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Camox » Sun Sep 27, 2009 11:05 pm

Very nice, like the last picture. I looking forward to more. :wink:

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by suvakas » Sun Sep 27, 2009 11:26 pm

Thanks guys!
Yeah, a lot of stuff to improve.

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Stromberg » Mon Sep 28, 2009 12:03 am

The wood texture suffers from heavy tiling tough ;)
Other than that it looks realy nice :D

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by suvakas » Mon Sep 28, 2009 12:08 am

Stromberg wrote:The wood texture suffers from heavy tiling tough ;)
Other than that it looks realy nice :D
Thanks. There is actually no tiling. The wood is like that. :wink:

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Stromberg » Mon Sep 28, 2009 12:10 am

Realy? XD
Well no complaints then :P

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by SzLaszlo » Mon Sep 28, 2009 1:38 am

Hi ,

Last image is very realistic , great work !

László

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by dakiru » Tue Sep 29, 2009 5:47 am

Third one is great. Look like a reference photo to me :lol: :wink:

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by suvakas » Wed Sep 30, 2009 10:24 am

Huge update. I modelled 3 domestic bottles. :)
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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by CTZn » Wed Sep 30, 2009 12:36 pm

All very good renders, suvakas !
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