Render Book(Stromberg)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by fused » Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:52 pm

nice!

how did you do the mountain shader?

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:55 pm

Thanks :)
Well there is some image maps, blended with some gradients to decide where what it going to appare, and exponent map for the snow of course, and bump map :)
Can be quite usefull :wink:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by djegoo » Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:36 am

oh ! my!! your images are so simple but so simply convincing.
how long did the water render? on my computer, it is always very long to start being clear so i am very impressed because you post so often interesting images, techniques etc...
in order to fasten my renders, i reduce water refraction i noticed. less realistic but not that shocking.

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by CTZn » Fri Aug 21, 2009 6:30 am

Stromberg wrote:Thanks :)
Well there is some image maps, blended with some gradients to decide where what it going to appare, and exponent map for the snow of course, and bump map :)
Can be quite usefull :wink:
Looking good !
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Fri Aug 21, 2009 12:53 pm

CTZn: Thanks, hopefully there will be some more renders that will fall in taste :)

djegoo: Thanks :)
I did render 3 images at the same time(all the ones with water) for 9 hours, but it didnt need to render that long ;)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:38 pm

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by zeitmeister » Sat Aug 22, 2009 1:55 am

Wow! Subtle motionblur would be great... love it!
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by fused » Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:08 am

Sweet rendering, Stromberg!

the glass rim looks like drinking out of it will leave you scarred for life :P

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Nick » Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:17 am

Congratualtion Stromberg, i like it :D

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:19 am

Nick: Thanks ;)

zeitmeister: Glad you liked it ;) I might render it again with some motion blur on ;)

Fused: Thanks, and i think i forgott to bevel the rim actualy, so you might not want to touch the rim when drinking :P

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by OnoSendai » Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:35 pm

Very cool glass render Stromberg.

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by dakiru » Sun Aug 23, 2009 3:22 am

Wow! beautiful!!! :shock:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:35 pm

Ono: Thanks :)
dakiru: Glad you like it :)

I was not planning to show this render before it was 100 & done, but i want to have some critics early one :)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by OnoSendai » Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:39 pm

Wow, very nice render!
some crits:
* Hanging power line and broken building in center/back need more polies.
* Metal panels on ground need a dirtier material
* ground texture tiles a bit behind metal panels.

Nice stuff!

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by doublez » Mon Aug 24, 2009 2:07 pm

Great start!
I agree with all that ono said and I have a few things to add.
-I didn't immediately make out what was laying in the middle on the ground. If they are metal they should be roughened up and maybe rusty.
-The brick wall on the left looks a bit flat compared to the rock walls on the right (you can also see the brick texture repeat).
-One of the lines looks like it runs straight into a wall, while the others don't. It just looks out of place to me (kinda of nitpicky, but it's just something I noticed)

Are the hanging clothes in the background modeled or textures? Either way, they look pretty good.

Other than that it's looking good :D

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