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Post by CTZn » Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:36 pm

I agree with kram and suvakas about colours output; reinhard tm doesn't serve your scene well (lack of contrast, mid tones washed a bit), camera is best (see my tip on how in today's wip I posted if you have problems with other tm schemes than reinhard).

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Post by Kram1032 » Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:11 am

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Oh, thanks that you agree with me, though it was Kosmo and suv who said something about the colour ;) My 2ct where "doesn't feel like a kitchen counter", due to tile-size and due to lack of a visible end...

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Post by crojack » Sat Sep 20, 2008 9:33 am

For context, I think one of those old manual egg beaters would look pretty cool. maybe add the stuff that would be used to make the cheesecake, some nice ceramic bowls, a spatula, that kind of thing.

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Post by Trebawa » Fri Sep 26, 2008 2:17 pm

I would add a backsplash to give the impression that it is a counter rather than an expanse of floor. A front edge might also help.

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Post by MSUdom5 » Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:02 pm

Haven't had a chance to work on this for a while, but I tried another variation and liked the way it came out. A little postpro in Gimp to correct the color issue I was having.
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Post by CTZn » Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:22 pm

Excellent stuff ! Ok the strawberries are a little too shiny but overally it's great !

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Post by Borgleader » Sun Dec 07, 2008 4:25 am

CTZn wrote:Excellent stuff ! Ok the strawberries are a little too shiny but overally it's great !
+1

The outside of them is fine, but the inside looks off. Great stuff though, I'd eat the cake! Srsly
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Post by Kram1032 » Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:16 am

+1 :D Very well done! Only possible crit already was said :)
Oh and maybe, the chocolate is a bit too reflective.... too high IoR or rather too high Exponent... (or maybe both)

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Post by CTZn » Sun Dec 07, 2008 3:06 pm

Borgleader wrote:
CTZn wrote:Excellent stuff ! Ok the strawberries are a little too shiny but overally it's great !
+1

The outside of them is fine, but the inside looks off. Great stuff though, I'd eat the cake! Srsly
You meant -1 Borg, The inner is allright to me but the outside too "plastic", that was my only crit :)

I'd eat that cake too !

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Post by neo0. » Sun Dec 07, 2008 6:19 pm

Thats incredible. How did you make a texture for something like a cheesecake?

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Post by PureSpider » Mon Dec 08, 2008 1:00 am

Erudition, wisdom, skill... :roll:

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Post by Borgleader » Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:50 am

neo0. wrote:Thats incredible. How did you make a texture for something like a cheesecake?
PureSpider wrote:Erudition, wisdom, skill... Much to learn you still have.
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Post by MSUdom5 » Sat Dec 13, 2008 5:55 am

Thanks everyone. Great feedback! :)

neo0, mostly trial and error, and lots of patience. :)

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Post by neo0. » Tue Dec 16, 2008 4:15 pm

Do use use image maps from google or do create everything by hand in photoshop? What did you use for lighting, out of curiosity?

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Post by MSUdom5 » Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:41 pm

neo0. wrote:Do use use image maps from google or do create everything by hand in photoshop? What did you use for lighting, out of curiosity?
I used photos as a reference. Most of these I found via google. Then I created image maps by hand using these reference photos. For lighting, I used the the same env map that BbB used for the pastry scene.

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