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Wow, that is one good-looking, interesting vehicle! Really [various expletives] good work!:D
//Start of ruthless criticism
The water (?) on the track looks a bit strange, in both shape and color. If it isn't water, disregard that.
The car stands out as brighter than the environment. Makes it harder to appreciate the detail in the smaller parts.
The tires look a little too plastic and the rear wheels could have done with a higher res texture (the tread looks jagged).
The yellow thing in the lower right corner could've been left out.
//End of criticism
Nice work getting the Indigo and Blender logos on the model, but what are the other two?
Did you use ISL for the body?
//Start of ruthless criticism
The water (?) on the track looks a bit strange, in both shape and color. If it isn't water, disregard that.
The car stands out as brighter than the environment. Makes it harder to appreciate the detail in the smaller parts.
The tires look a little too plastic and the rear wheels could have done with a higher res texture (the tread looks jagged).
The yellow thing in the lower right corner could've been left out.
//End of criticism
Nice work getting the Indigo and Blender logos on the model, but what are the other two?
Did you use ISL for the body?
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solid work man!
the water looks alright to me, but the rest of the pavement needs to look a bit more wet (shiny) for it to make sense. that thing is a bit too shiny, but i think thats fine. could look cool all beat up and rugged.
have you tried a more human camera angle? and the yellow thing on the right side looks very out of place/
the water looks alright to me, but the rest of the pavement needs to look a bit more wet (shiny) for it to make sense. that thing is a bit too shiny, but i think thats fine. could look cool all beat up and rugged.
have you tried a more human camera angle? and the yellow thing on the right side looks very out of place/
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Hi
I win this competition/tender
( http://www.f1-live.hu/index.php?option= ... 9&Itemid=1 ( Hungarian )) with this render image
, thanks indigo
I win this competition/tender
( http://www.f1-live.hu/index.php?option= ... 9&Itemid=1 ( Hungarian )) with this render image
, thanks indigo
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