Medicine
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A few crits:
1. This one is more of a suggestion, make it 5x2 ?
2. The pill "bubbles" should have more of a hanger shape. An arc like shape on the lenght and flat ends.
3. There should be more space between the "bubbles"
4. The base looks a tad too thick. And a bit too rounded/soft on the edges. This is usually a sheet of plastic cut by mechanical knives (see "How it's made" on the discovery channel )
It's good to see you actually got it "off the ground". Godd luck with the rest of it.
1. This one is more of a suggestion, make it 5x2 ?
2. The pill "bubbles" should have more of a hanger shape. An arc like shape on the lenght and flat ends.
3. There should be more space between the "bubbles"
4. The base looks a tad too thick. And a bit too rounded/soft on the edges. This is usually a sheet of plastic cut by mechanical knives (see "How it's made" on the discovery channel )
It's good to see you actually got it "off the ground". Godd luck with the rest of it.
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Well yeah but you can understand my confusion as this current thread IS called Medicine (and dentine packages are easy to find, he could've shown us that from the start)zsouthboy wrote:Well, technically he just said how to model a blister package (which the dentyne package is) in the other thread...
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http://www.northerner.com/pic_large/firebreak.jpg
Hard to believe you couldnt find a right sized gum package picture, but fine. If thats what you were after than most of my crits dont apply. But still the name of your thread couldve been "Gum Package", woulve made things much much clearer from the start.
Hard to believe you couldnt find a right sized gum package picture, but fine. If thats what you were after than most of my crits dont apply. But still the name of your thread couldve been "Gum Package", woulve made things much much clearer from the start.
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Phuuu.... where to start???! I'm sure even you can see some stuff that need serious Help!neo0. wrote:Crits welcome.
Finish one thing, that start the other!
Otherwise you torture the viewers eye with a bunch of unfinished loveless pieces thrown together.
Also please take care of some better studio that a plane lit by sun....
my poor eyes
Try a simple beveled Studio BG with env map lightning, this would bring some love in your WIP scenes
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