Straw bales final
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Straw bales final
Hope you like it!
Cheers, David
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Re: Straw bales final
That is really cool David. The leaves are a bit distracting though... maybe desaturate them a bit?
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Re: Straw bales final
Damn right we like it.
Perfectly fits the season
And now to the gallery!!
Perfectly fits the season
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And now to the gallery!!
Re: Straw bales final
Moin Zeiti
Gefällt mir sehr gut, einzigster Kritikpunkt sind die Eichenblätter im Vordergrund.
Strohballen sind perfekt.
Gruß Axel
Gefällt mir sehr gut, einzigster Kritikpunkt sind die Eichenblätter im Vordergrund.
Strohballen sind perfekt.
Gruß Axel
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Re: Straw bales final
Thank you very much!
Meanwhile, the foreground twigs are bugging me, too... a lot.
I'm gonna make an update without these.. they really suck, you're absolutely right.
Meanwhile, the foreground twigs are bugging me, too... a lot.
I'm gonna make an update without these.. they really suck, you're absolutely right.
Cheers, David
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Re: Straw bales final
Beautiful work
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I have to agree.. seems like an odd place for a tree to be anyways. I look forward to seeing the new version!zeitmeister wrote:Thank you very much!
the foreground twigs are bugging me, too... a lot.
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Re: Straw bales final
... removed.
Better?
Better?
Cheers, David
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Re: Straw bales final
Much better !zeitmeister wrote:... removed.
Better?
Affengeil ....so kenn ich die Strohballen des Taunus.
Gruß Axel
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Re: Straw bales final
nice!
Re: Straw bales final
Yes Zeitmaster, very very nice!!
I liked the attempt to introduce a sort of a out-of-focus foreground to the scene, although it was clearly too big..Maybe introducing a smaller detail....
Have you thought anything about the distant background? I don't know, some yellow trees, a barn...
I really like your saturated skies, btw! Are they the real lightsource (EXR map) or just a postpro-added background?
I liked the attempt to introduce a sort of a out-of-focus foreground to the scene, although it was clearly too big..Maybe introducing a smaller detail....
Have you thought anything about the distant background? I don't know, some yellow trees, a barn...
I really like your saturated skies, btw! Are they the real lightsource (EXR map) or just a postpro-added background?
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Re: Straw bales final
Thank you very much!
Placing something in the foreground was the intention, but I think that vegetation is the wrong idea here.
Maybe something related to hay or agriculture in general... but at the moment I've got no idea.
I rendered a simple backplate into the image, but masked it out again in PS to have more control over colour and tonemapping.
Lighting is simple sunksy.
Indeed, I have some kind of background landscape, but I am not very happy with it... the perspective is very low, either.
Currently I am reworking the foil to a real double-sided SSS material; maybe I will change the background to the one with a little more landcape.
Thanky again for your tips and critics!
Placing something in the foreground was the intention, but I think that vegetation is the wrong idea here.
Maybe something related to hay or agriculture in general... but at the moment I've got no idea.
I rendered a simple backplate into the image, but masked it out again in PS to have more control over colour and tonemapping.
Lighting is simple sunksy.
Indeed, I have some kind of background landscape, but I am not very happy with it... the perspective is very low, either.
Currently I am reworking the foil to a real double-sided SSS material; maybe I will change the background to the one with a little more landcape.
Thanky again for your tips and critics!
Cheers, David
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Re: Straw bales final
A pitchfork stuck into the ground!zeitmeister wrote:Thank you very much!
Placing something in the foreground was the intention, but I think that vegetation is the wrong idea here.
Maybe something related to hay or agriculture in general... but at the moment I've got no idea.
I rendered a simple backplate into the image, but masked it out again in PS to have more control over colour and tonemapping.
Lighting is simple sunksy.
Indeed, I have some kind of background landscape, but I am not very happy with it... the perspective is very low, either.
Currently I am reworking the foil to a real double-sided SSS material; maybe I will change the background to the one with a little more landcape.
Thanky again for your tips and critics!
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- zeitmeister
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Straw bales final
But nice ideas!
Maybe I can combine it with elements from my old country road setting...
new scene for that.![Smile :-)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
I'll rework the foil an the general quality, and then it has to be enough for a formaly short test.![Smile :-)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
Thank you again!
Maybe I can combine it with elements from my old country road setting...
new scene for that.
![Smile :-)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
I'll rework the foil an the general quality, and then it has to be enough for a formaly short test.
![Smile :-)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
Thank you again!
Cheers, David
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