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Blazedremedy
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Bathroom Scene

Post by Blazedremedy » Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:16 am

Modeled from Scan Data and Rendered with Skindigo/Indigo.

Would love to see constructive or positive feedback
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Post by crojack » Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:28 am

not bad at all, but the floor tile looks a little 2d.
and the sink looks way low poly.

the sun reflection on the wall, that you see in the mirror, is pretty cool.

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Post by Blazedremedy » Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:31 am

Thanks alot Cro. Yeah the sink is low polly: /

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Post by Kram1032 » Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:34 am

Nice bath but some things are very lowpoly...

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Post by MESCH973 » Fri Sep 26, 2008 6:26 am

Nice.......... but is very lowpoly... :wink:

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Post by Zom-B » Fri Sep 26, 2008 6:45 am

The ground need more tiling and some displacement or bump,
the towels could use some displacement too!

A lot of potential in this scene, go for it!

BTW: Toilet Paper seems to be made of glass ceramic too ;)
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Post by Stur » Fri Sep 26, 2008 9:33 am

Your colors are too saturated, specially the blue. For realism, destaturate a lot.
Oh, and you should add plinths too.

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Post by Pibuz » Sun Sep 28, 2008 1:24 am

Hi Blaze! Hi agree with Stur: your colors are a little too saturated for real life behaviour, and that jumps to the eye in a moment.
Try working a little on the tiles mats: a little more reflection (perhaps blurry a bit) on the floor mat, and a more visible bump/displacement would help, i think. The sink and the toilet are too lowpoly (but you already know that :D ) to seem real, but the mat really works, in my opinion. The only thing I'd change is the faucet and the knobs: i would try to set them to metal/chrome. I think they'd really behave like good boys!
I think the toilet paper needs a little more work (now it's too reflective...) but i really LOVE the box over the toilet!!!!
last thing, i'd work a little more on the curtain mat: perhaps a diffuse transmitter blended with a subtle reflective plastic would do the job!

Keep posting this work of yours: seems very interesting!
Congratulations!

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