MY LAST INTERIOR
- rosario975
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MY LAST INTERIOR
hi indigo boys
this my last job..........
comments and critics?
this my last job..........
comments and critics?
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- Phr0stByte
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Awesome stuff - top notch, really. I am not quite sure about the refrig. bump, but that could be personal taste. Could use a little more tonemapping, as rgigante pointed out. But, again, really nice!
Also, can you give details on what the scene was modeled in and how long you let this one render? Thanx!
[EDIT] LOL - you were just behind me. Nothing like an instant response!
Also, can you give details on what the scene was modeled in and how long you let this one render? Thanx!
[EDIT] LOL - you were just behind me. Nothing like an instant response!
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- rosario975
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Very nice & detailed scene! My thots on its possible improvement are:
-turn on (some of) the interior lights and re-balance your levels
-the leaves on the plant by the window need an sss material
-the toy train is too large, scale-wise and its colors are dull for some reason
-the fridge's reflection is not working as is - too grainy and reflective. Maybe try a "brushed" type texture? Not sure here.
-boring camera angle - needs drama
-lose the text on the range hood (tacky?)
-Its just me, but I'd put the teapot on the stove rather than by the window...
Has huge potential! Keep tweaking it, I say.
-turn on (some of) the interior lights and re-balance your levels
-the leaves on the plant by the window need an sss material
-the toy train is too large, scale-wise and its colors are dull for some reason
-the fridge's reflection is not working as is - too grainy and reflective. Maybe try a "brushed" type texture? Not sure here.
-boring camera angle - needs drama
-lose the text on the range hood (tacky?)
-Its just me, but I'd put the teapot on the stove rather than by the window...
Has huge potential! Keep tweaking it, I say.
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