Cliff House

[Lal-O]

Hi Guys.
I want to share with you my latest work. Hope you like it

[Lal-O]

By the way...is anyone able to tell me what is that kind of "patern" in the glass and how get rid of it ? . Everytime i use the foreground alpha that artifact shows up in glass and reflective surfaces ,mainly in glass

[thesquirell]

I'm digging this Farnsworth vibe.

[Oscar J]

Technically quite good! Nice detailing and image composition overall.

A few things stick out to me:

That ?wood? material in the second shot isn't convincing. It should be a great material since it takes up so much of the scene.

If I desaturate your renders in PS, they look a lot better. That suggests to me that there are some issues with colour balance and/or saturation.

The weather is very cloudy and depressing. That might be the look you're going for, but the warm colour balance throws it off a bit, looks almost like a sunset. For HDRI skies I'd give these a try: http://www.viz-people.com/portfolio/free-hdri-maps/

Please take all this as constructive critisism.

Keep it up!

[Pibuz]

Lal-O, I also prefer shot number 02 for the overall composition, although I think a little more room around the architectur wouldn't have hurt as well

Vegetation is wonderful and I do agree with Oscar: a more intriguing HDR would make emerge the building a tad more!

[Lal-O]

Technically quite good! Nice detailing and image composition overall.

That ?wood? material in the second shot isn't convincing. It should be a great material since it takes up so much of the scene.

The weather is very cloudy and depressing. That might be the look you're going for.

Please take all this as constructive critisism.

Thanks Oscar for the suggestions.

About the wood...yeah , my client already pointed that.
That is right, i love depressing mood in my renderings , for some reason my sunny renderings look less realistic than the sunny, gray or dark ones. I need to work so much more on them.

Constructive critisism is alwasy welcome , is the main reason to show our projects. But i must confess that this time it was kinda hard to see so much comments a bout what i should do to make a better looking images 'cus this time i tought they were perfect (of course ...perfection..beauty, etc etc...are relative concepts ) So no left to keep working.

Thaks for the comments Oscar J. They are really welcome

[Lal-O]

I'm digging this Farnsworth vibe.

Hahaha...I tought the same when i saw the project ...It was like " ...Mhhh...it seems Mies van der Rohe vibe is all over the place " .

By the way , i just rendered the project

[Lal-O]

Lal-O, I also prefer shot number 02 for the overall composition, although I think a little more room around the architectur wouldn't have hurt as well

Vegetation is wonderful and I do agree with Oscar: a more intriguing HDR would make emerge the building a tad more!

Yeah , you right...next time i'll put a major effort in the camera composition

[Lal-O]

What are the weird artifacts in clear and architectural glass?...i just can not get rid of it . Any Clue ? Is always there when i use foreground Alpha.