simple living hall design

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wan zazua
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simple living hall design

Post by wan zazua » Sat Oct 22, 2016 9:53 am

criticism welcome
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Pibuz
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Re: simple living hall design

Post by Pibuz » Sun Oct 23, 2016 10:37 pm

Hi Wan! First of all, never forget to specify what modeler you're using.

That said, the image seems very clear: were the rendering times reasonable?

I don't like too much the composition: the perspective is a little confusing and there is no "focus" in the image, try to aim the attention to something (the couch?) and make all the other objects secondary. Try to use a central perspective with straight vertical lines. Moreover, work a little more on the materials which cover large parts of the image, such as the floor and the back wall: at the moment the two mats are really basic and totally lack realism.

That would be all, just to start :lol: :mrgreen:

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