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Hi guys !!!
This is the rear facade of my latest project. Some days ago i posted the main facade and...i hope this one is better than the other one.

Cheers.

Sure it is.
Paradoxically, I feel like the architecture is "blocking" the view
I suggest you give it a little more "room" to make it breathe.

It would come out much more..calm!

While I haven't seen the last one, I am at one with Pibuz concerning the "air" the building needs to manifest itself. Few things I would play with (matter of taste):
- watermark could be 20% of it's size now, and just 40% transparent, so it's barely visible but readable, perhaps even rotated vertically being sticked to the edge of the image - just the way it doesn't confront the hero of the show. A subtle fingerprint is better than a massive scar
- I feel a bit of disharmony in saturation/lighting situation of the object versus the environment, especially the bottom-right part of the image.
- that half-of-the-car doesn't seem to add detail, instead making it "dirtier", but hey, that really could be just me.

Pibuz wrote:Sure it is.
Paradoxically, I feel like the architecture is "blocking" the view
I suggest you give it a little more "room" to make it breathe.

It would come out much more..calm!

Hi Pibuz.
I have the full west right to the facade , that is why i have a full "wall" of wood (sunbreakers) https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/23 ... e868c3.jpg

dakiru wrote:While I haven't seen the last one, I am at one with Pibuz concerning the "air" the building needs to manifest itself. Few things I would play with (matter of taste):
- watermark could be 20% of it's size now, and just 40% transparent, so it's barely visible but readable, perhaps even rotated vertically being sticked to the edge of the image - just the way it doesn't confront the hero of the show. A subtle fingerprint is better than a massive scar
- I feel a bit of disharmony in saturation/lighting situation of the object versus the environment, especially the bottom-right part of the image.
- that half-of-the-car doesn't seem to add detail, instead making it "dirtier", but hey, that really could be just me.

Hi dakiru !!! Thank you for the suggestions, i'll keep them in mid next time
This is the main facade of this project.
http://www.indigorenderer.com/forum/dow ... &mode=view

Very cool architecture!
Perhaps the "chocolate side" of the house could get a little more "love" (=light)?