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Godzilla
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Writing tips

Post by Godzilla » Mon Mar 31, 2014 11:08 am

https://www.behance.net/gallery/Writing-Tips/15879265


A project for a "Visual Thinking" class I'm taking. I'd love feedback :)

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Re: Writing tips

Post by Oscar J » Mon Mar 31, 2014 9:29 pm

Nice colours!

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Re: Writing tips

Post by Voytech » Tue Apr 01, 2014 12:07 am

Very cool! Love the textures on the wall.

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Re: Writing tips

Post by fenerolina » Tue Apr 01, 2014 11:01 am

Good concept, my favourite is the alliteration one, the others are not so round idea for me. Also I would have choosen not so strong colours (students are enough distracted nowadays)..

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Re: Writing tips

Post by Godzilla » Sun Apr 06, 2014 6:33 am

Thanks guys. Updated all renders based on class feedback.
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Re: Writing tips

Post by Oscar J » Sun Apr 06, 2014 7:14 am

Great work.

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