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Was a bit bored.... :)

Posted: Thu May 16, 2013 11:06 am
by Pikadili89
Heya guys, I made this scene with google sketchup warehouse models and done a lil rendering...hope you like it and c&c are always welcome! cheers! :)

Re: Was a bit bored.... :)

Posted: Thu May 16, 2013 11:36 pm
by Juju
Good work! My comments below:

- timber boarding, back down on the bump, also add more phong, try getting a better (higher res) texture.
- counterfeit money! (serials matching, too obvious).
- gold looks fake somehow.
- whiskey bottle, I would make the bottle only about a third full, find a cork texture.
- dirtmaps!

Re: Was a bit bored.... :)

Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 5:33 am
by Pikadili89
Glad you like it, thanks for usefull sugestions :)

Re: Was a bit bored.... :)

Posted: Thu May 23, 2013 11:42 pm
by Mongoose
i like it very much man
nice work, as he said the gold should be less dark, less tanned, a little bit brighter,

Re: Was a bit bored.... :)

Posted: Fri May 24, 2013 7:45 pm
by Bosseye
Looks good! Nice work.

The main things that jump out at me are the texture of the wood floor which needs a little work and also smooth out your mesh a bit on the pocket watch, its a bit angular.

Re: Was a bit bored.... :)

Posted: Sat May 25, 2013 1:07 am
by Pikadili89
Thanks for support guys, and nice critics, honest ones! :)

Re: Was a bit bored.... :)

Posted: Mon May 27, 2013 1:27 am
by Mongoose
why not place it all on a table and use the old "secretary lamp" scene you know those old 50's green and white with the green cap.

Re: Was a bit bored.... :)

Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2014 3:53 am
by riley1389
I like it! For the watch you could probably use skindigo's subdivision on the model, because SketchUp's stock smoothing wouldn't help much