Was a bit bored.... :)
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Was a bit bored.... :)
Heya guys, I made this scene with google sketchup warehouse models and done a lil rendering...hope you like it and c&c are always welcome! cheers!
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Good work! My comments below:
- timber boarding, back down on the bump, also add more phong, try getting a better (higher res) texture.
- counterfeit money! (serials matching, too obvious).
- gold looks fake somehow.
- whiskey bottle, I would make the bottle only about a third full, find a cork texture.
- dirtmaps!
- timber boarding, back down on the bump, also add more phong, try getting a better (higher res) texture.
- counterfeit money! (serials matching, too obvious).
- gold looks fake somehow.
- whiskey bottle, I would make the bottle only about a third full, find a cork texture.
- dirtmaps!
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Re: Was a bit bored.... :)
Glad you like it, thanks for usefull sugestions
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i like it very much man
nice work, as he said the gold should be less dark, less tanned, a little bit brighter,
nice work, as he said the gold should be less dark, less tanned, a little bit brighter,
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Looks good! Nice work.
The main things that jump out at me are the texture of the wood floor which needs a little work and also smooth out your mesh a bit on the pocket watch, its a bit angular.
The main things that jump out at me are the texture of the wood floor which needs a little work and also smooth out your mesh a bit on the pocket watch, its a bit angular.
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Thanks for support guys, and nice critics, honest ones!
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why not place it all on a table and use the old "secretary lamp" scene you know those old 50's green and white with the green cap.
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I like it! For the watch you could probably use skindigo's subdivision on the model, because SketchUp's stock smoothing wouldn't help much
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