hi,
another interior scene...
Sketchup 7 + indigo 2.6.1. Win32-bit
Comments are very welcome end appreciated.
scene with coffee table
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Re: scene with coffee table
it looks great!!! but if the focus was on the table maybe it will be cooler just saying
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Focus looks great to me, but the sofa texture is too visibly repeated
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Re: scene with coffee table
I would go easy on the DOF. It looks like the interior of a doll's house.
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I think the scale of the wood floor is factor 1.5-2 too large adding to that doll-house effect.tar_gniK wrote:I would go easy on the DOF. It looks like the interior of a doll's house.
I personally would like to see more of that interesting coffee table
Re: scene with coffee table
hi,
thanks for all comments.
anyway, thanks for all Your comments once again.
wojtek
thanks for all comments.
the version with focus on the table was first (see below) but i like "blury table" version more - seems to be litlle bit more "photographical"Andy Andreev wrote:it looks great!!! but if the focus was on the table maybe it will be cooler just saying
You're right. I didn't notice that myself, but I agree. Will fix this.galinette wrote:Focus looks great to me, but the sofa texture is too visibly repeated
Hmm, I like it the way it is, but maybe You're right. I will try render this with higher apperture number ( here's 2.8 )tar_gniK wrote:I would go easy on the DOF. It looks like the interior of a doll's house.
You're right. I was sure I've set planks width to be about 12cm, but I've just checked - it's about 17,5cm. Silly meHeadroom wrote:I think the scale of the wood floor is factor 1.5-2 too large adding to that doll-house effect.
It's IKEA. I'm not sure if this model is still on sale though.Headroom wrote:I personally would like to see more of that interesting coffee table
anyway, thanks for all Your comments once again.
wojtek
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Re: scene with coffee table
Still "photographic" or not i like very very much the second image
Re: scene with coffee table
Hello,
It looks amazing, but you could make some changes with the table like colour or you could take any other table like of glass. I have one Barcelona coffee table the table is amazing I can't describe its design but it is made of glass, I think that table would look more attractive. Just imagine, but your taste is also awesome.
Thank you!
It looks amazing, but you could make some changes with the table like colour or you could take any other table like of glass. I have one Barcelona coffee table the table is amazing I can't describe its design but it is made of glass, I think that table would look more attractive. Just imagine, but your taste is also awesome.
Thank you!
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