Hi all!
Here's a new one!
So...
It's not perfect at all, don't worry I know that already!
1) the oranges look like those plastic fruit kids play with
I think this is mostly due to the following:
- It's the first time I've used Displacement, and I have to admit that it took me hours before I could get a result close to what I had in mind - still, it's quite far from what I want - I think Displacement is quite hard to "master" - any tips welcome!
- The modelling of the oranges is very basic, which doesn't help with realism : it's only orange spheres indeed... with pinches of Sculpting so they don't look perfectly spherical...
2) The apples on either side of the orange don't look like they are resting at the bottom of the cup - they tend to "levitate" a bit.
3) The bananas could do with a dimmer yellow texture (or a more "brownish" colour) - although I used proper pictures to do the texture...
In my defense, though, I have to say that these fruit are not intended to be seen from such a close distance.
I made them so I could put them later on in future scenes (in a kitchen, on a dining table, etc.)
As always : please comment on this, I NEED TO LEARN !!!
See ya guys!!!
Cup of fruit
Cup of fruit
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Re: Cup of fruit
Ah such a classic render!
Re: Cup of fruit
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Re: Cup of fruit
Good render to me
Maybe change your focus distance.
Your yellowish light setup saturated a bit your banana and orange, but it's good
Maybe change your focus distance.
Your yellowish light setup saturated a bit your banana and orange, but it's good
Re: Cup of fruit
Thanks!
Yep, indeed the yellowish light doesn't help with the already yellow bananas...
I'll remember that!
Yep, indeed the yellowish light doesn't help with the already yellow bananas...
I'll remember that!
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Re: Cup of fruit
I don't think I could give advices because I'm afraid it's beyond my knowledge, but I'll say I love your first attempt.
edit : doh ! One small advice though : subdivide a little bit more your plate
edit : doh ! One small advice though : subdivide a little bit more your plate
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Re: Cup of fruit
I agree, it's subtle but you can notice the hard edges on the sides of the render.Stur wrote:
edit : doh ! One small advice though : subdivide a little bit more your plate
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Re: Cup of fruit
Dammit!
Thought it would go unnoticed!!!
Indeed the plate needs subdividing, but since it's aimed at being seen from a distance, maybe it won't need it...
Thanks for your compliments!
Thought it would go unnoticed!!!
Indeed the plate needs subdividing, but since it's aimed at being seen from a distance, maybe it won't need it...
Thanks for your compliments!
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