Render book(Psychotron80)

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Psychotron80
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Render book(Psychotron80)

Post by Psychotron80 » Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:54 am

Hi all,
following Stromberg's great idea, I'm starting a render book to avoid cluttering the forum with posts containg my n00b excercise renders...!

Just to start, this is what I've been working on in the last days. Any comments/corrections are very welcome!

Psy
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Schosch
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Re: Render book(Psychotron80)

Post by Schosch » Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:14 am

Some things I noticed:
-The ground plane is cut off in the upper left corner
-The tile texture is too low-res/big and some bump mapping would help a lot
-There are black spots visible in the bottles... (don't know if it is just the refraction of the tiles or this issue)

Psychotron80
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Re: Render book(Psychotron80)

Post by Psychotron80 » Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:43 am

Schosch wrote:Some things I noticed:
-The ground plane is cut off in the upper left corner
-The tile texture is too low-res/big and some bump mapping would help a lot
-There are black spots visible in the bottles... (don't know if it is just the refraction of the tiles or this issue)
Thanks Schosch!
- yes I'm aware of the ground plane cut...but actually it's just a test for glass & water... :oops:
- the tile texture is probably too big, I agree! It should be already bump-mapped (it's taken from here)
- yeah I noticed the spots...I'll check this.

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