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Post by Stromberg » Sat Apr 04, 2009 5:36 am

Thanks for the comment :)
Have fixed some of what you say, well indigo has "perfect" anti-alising ;)

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Post by Stromberg » Sat Apr 04, 2009 1:48 pm

Update! ;)
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Post by CTZn » Sun Apr 05, 2009 2:42 am

I'm finding that the inset corner for the windows is very sharp and seemingly perfectly straight, I would "fix" this up ;)

In the same fashion the couch could be less eye popping with a bit of a broken planarity, maybe blend the bump with a large, wavy one ? But if it comes to its silhouette (is that word english ?) it would use that texture as a soft displacement !

So far I'm liking it more and more !

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Post by Kram1032 » Sun Apr 05, 2009 9:14 am

very nice progress :)
try to increase your ssf... there are very aliased lines around... for instance the bright table's edge...

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Post by Stromberg » Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:55 am

Another image, made for fun i will say this is finished.
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:04 pm

Update :shock:

Keep commenting on the interior scene, as i need help with it ;)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by suvakas » Thu Apr 09, 2009 7:47 pm

lol
That last chair is a killer !!
I really like it. :D

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Post by Stromberg » Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:53 am

Did render this for 6 hours over nettwork with 2 pc's quads so it's 8 core alltogether.
Still noise in the lamp one, i dont know if this is a "improvment" but i'm trying :lol:
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by CTZn » Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:39 am

Another chair where you need to fall painfully before standing up ? Haha kidding, it's nice ;) As I was typing when the site was moved*, designing is fun, keep them going !

Are you doing light testing with reinhard tonemapping stromberg :evil: ?

* ah no, it was in another thread of yours ;)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by SATtva_ » Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:49 am

Lamp's cord is too thick I think.

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Post by Stromberg » Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:00 am

Thanks for the comments :)
Well the cord is a bit to thick, so i'l cahnge that.
And the chairs and so where realy fun to make :)
In the interior i used camera tonemapping, and the chair images used reinhard(anything wrong with that?XD)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Pibuz » Fri Apr 10, 2009 7:22 pm

Yeah! Nice interior!!! The high contrast makes it really real-like!
Congratulations Stromberg! Is this image post-producted or is it straight out of the box?
Others filters applied?

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:44 pm

Pibuz: Thanks :)
It's comments like this that makes it all worth it.
It's straight out of the box, no post production allowed here :wink:

Here is a new image i hope you will like, i gues i will called this finnished, so i may put it in the final gallery forum....
Please tell me what you think.
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by PureSpider » Sat Apr 11, 2009 12:07 am

OMFG :shock:
The first one is awesome!
I love it! :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by SATtva_ » Sat Apr 11, 2009 1:08 am

Oh yeah, baby! ^_______^ The first one is outstanding!

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