Render Book(Stromberg)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Mon Aug 24, 2009 2:12 pm

Thanks, Ono and doublez glad you like it... i might not add rust since they are made of stone ;)
I have added some bump to them now so they seam more rocky...
Smoothed the hanging wire now, so they poly's dont show.
Going to fix the tiling on the ground.
Agree about the line looking like one side is going straight into the wall, might change that.
They hanging clothes are modeled(simulated), using cloth in cinema 4D :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:50 am

Here is a update, i know it has alot of issues.. but i might aswell post it :lol:
Please come with critics ;)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by CTZn » Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:06 am

My glaze is much attracted by the central wall in the background, it's shouting for some shading. Also one can somehow feel there is nothing around there, you could add basic blocks that would preferably not been directly visible, but wich would propagate the atmosphere of a village. I mean an alpha map to simulate the shadows of a tree leaves or some building block stopping light in the surroundings.

Breaking the view symmetry perhaps would give the shot more dynamic, move the camera a bit on one side (parallel to its actual aiming direction), or rotate it slightly and use a lateral shift correction perhaps ?

Thanks for asking for crits stromberg :P ;)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:54 am

CTZn: Thanks for the critics :)
I have worked some on those things, havnt realy worked to much on it yety, but here is a update :wink:
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Whaat » Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:27 am

Stromberg wrote:
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Hey Stromgerg,
This great material belongs in the database. Can you upload it or post a working link to it so I can upload it for you? :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:32 am

Whaat: Thanks, i can upload that materials and some others now, if the material database works right :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:44 am

I got that the requested page couldnt be found -.-

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Nick » Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:03 am

Congratulation Stromberg, i like this scena!!! :wink:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:07 am

Nick: Thanks, i will countinue on it later :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Whaat » Mon Aug 31, 2009 7:01 am

Stromberg wrote:I got that the requested page couldnt be found -.-
That's weird. The database has been working fine for me. Maybe you should let ben know that you're having problems.

Maybe you need to delete your cookies or something. :?:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Mon Aug 31, 2009 7:08 am

Yeah, find it weird aswell.
Did delete my cookies tough, didnt work :(
Maybe i should send ben a pm..

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:25 pm

Update time :)
Been a while since my last image now, but school has started and all that so have had less time.
But when we realy start modeling things at school, you will see many more renders from me :wink:
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Mon Sep 07, 2009 10:59 am

Small update :)
Critics are very welcome ;)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by OnoSendai » Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:04 am

The vine looks a bit out of control :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by PureSpider » Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:05 am

WATCH OUT! GIANT IVY IS COMING FOR US! :shock:

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