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alex22
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Post by alex22 » Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:09 pm

There is actually an indigo group in the steam network.
http://steamcommunity.com/groups/indigo ... er/members

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Post by Stromberg » Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:04 am

Alex: Thanks didnt know that :)

Well here is a update on the rim, please give some critis :D
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Post by Stromberg » Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:12 am

Update!
It dosnt hurt you to write soemthing, because i know you are looking on it :lol:
I cant get any better in no one is telling me whats wrong :wink:
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Post by Kram1032 » Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:18 am

well, we can't tell you what's wrong, if it's already perfect :P
Maybe the name of the tire-makers is missing on the side, though, with that rim, it might be hidden anyway.... also, dirt and scratches? :)

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Post by Stromberg » Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:11 am

Well i take first part as you like the image ;)
Yeah the names on the side should be there, i'l fix that asp... and i'l see if i can scratch up my rim some :lol:
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Post by Kram1032 » Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:04 am

:D

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Post by Stromberg » Wed Mar 11, 2009 9:31 am

Done some more on the rim, did add some text, tweaked some materials, trying to render a "dirty" version now :lol:
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Post by Kram1032 » Wed Mar 11, 2009 11:04 am

:D Develops really great!

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Post by CTZn » Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:56 pm

Hi Stromberg

Specifically I prefer the second render because of the left light, outlining the "dents".

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Post by Stromberg » Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:29 am

Thanks for the comments :)
Well i can rendered it tomorrow maybe with the left light :wink:

Here is the "new" scene, think i may need to change the rim material back to chrome..
Tell me what you think 8)
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Post by cpfresh » Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:03 pm

hiya stromberg! i like your wheel project so far. it is making nice progress with every new image. i guess if i would do anything to your model it would be making the rim edge slimmer, maybe add some lug nuts, i'd make the disc only that shiny bright material on the edges that the caliper grabs, and lastly i'd beef up the caliper a little to grab more disc. you have this fat racing disc and the caliper appears to only grab a little edge of it (unless i just cant see clear enough.) i guess that about wraps it up for me. keep up the great work, i look forward to seeing more progress!

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Post by Stromberg » Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:57 am

Thanks for the comment, well i have done some more on it.. a very small update, made the rim edge slimmer, and the caliper a bit more beefy ;)
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Post by Stromberg » Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:44 pm

New render :)
It's not very good, but it's something, please comment :lol:
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Post by CTZn » Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:53 pm

nice move, I like it !
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Post by Stromberg » Sun Mar 22, 2009 1:20 am

Glad you like it CTZn :)
Here is a cleaner version, no post-pro.
Please comment :wink:
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