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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun May 17, 2009 3:48 am

One more :P
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by CTZn » Sun May 17, 2009 5:31 am

It's coming along nicely stromberg :)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun May 17, 2009 6:07 am

Thanks CTZn :)
I'l hope it gets even better when i'm all done :wink:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Doug Armand » Sun May 17, 2009 7:29 am

That is really nice - particularly like the fabric/wire texture on the face.
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Wed May 20, 2009 5:58 am

Thanks for the comments, going to call this one finished :)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Fri May 22, 2009 3:47 am

Here is just some tests i made, it looks really horrible :P
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun May 24, 2009 4:05 am

Forgett that other scene, started on a new and better one :)
Please give some critics and so on :D
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun May 24, 2009 5:37 am

Posted this alot of places on this forum :P

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by CTZn » Sun May 24, 2009 9:20 am

Pour some water to this poor plant ! Ewr... looking good, no crits so far, I'm looking forward for the materials you will use.
Forgett that other scene, started on a new and better one :)
Indeed better, another good move from you ;)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Polinalkrimizei » Sun May 24, 2009 10:51 am

Yep, definetly more interesting... I did like the floor though!

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Camox » Sun May 24, 2009 11:05 am

Nice scene, your indigo skills are better and better. The bulbs and plants liked me very well.

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun May 24, 2009 3:04 pm

Thanks for the comments :)
I hope i will get this scene some what good looking in the end.
Tried todo a leather material to the couch, but failed... any suggestions on what material that would fit better? :)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by WytRaven » Sun May 24, 2009 4:03 pm

Personally I think the material you are using would be fine with less bump. It's more the model that look a bit "wrong" for a leather couch...it appears a bit "hard" if you know what I mean particularly the ends of the arm rests at the top. The curve from arm rest top to arm rest front seems unnaturally sharp.
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by CTZn » Sun May 24, 2009 11:02 pm

I second WytRaven, specifically on the bumpyness. Often is it sub-millimetric for (unweared) leather.
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun May 24, 2009 11:22 pm

Thanks for the comments :)
You are right about the bumpyness, i did lower it many times, but it's just seams to be strong,
Changing the bump size B to it's lowest now.
What happends if i lower the bump map exponent?

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