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by Stromberg » Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:04 am
Alex: Thanks didnt know that
Well here is a update on the rim, please give some critis
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by Stromberg » Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:12 am
Update!
It dosnt hurt you to write soemthing, because i know you are looking on it
I cant get any better in no one is telling me whats wrong
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by Kram1032 » Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:18 am
well, we can't tell you what's wrong, if it's already perfect
Maybe the name of the tire-makers is missing on the side, though, with that rim, it might be hidden anyway.... also, dirt and scratches?
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by Stromberg » Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:11 am
Well i take first part as you like the image
Yeah the names on the side should be there, i'l fix that asp... and i'l see if i can scratch up my rim some
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by Kram1032 » Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:04 am
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by Stromberg » Wed Mar 11, 2009 9:31 am
Done some more on the rim, did add some text, tweaked some materials, trying to render a "dirty" version now
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by Kram1032 » Wed Mar 11, 2009 11:04 am
Develops really great!
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by CTZn » Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:56 pm
Hi Stromberg
Specifically I prefer the second render because of the left light, outlining the "dents".
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by Stromberg » Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:29 am
Thanks for the comments
Well i can rendered it tomorrow maybe with the left light
Here is the "new" scene, think i may need to change the rim material back to chrome..
Tell me what you think
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by cpfresh » Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:03 pm
hiya stromberg! i like your wheel project so far. it is making nice progress with every new image. i guess if i would do anything to your model it would be making the rim edge slimmer, maybe add some lug nuts, i'd make the disc only that shiny bright material on the edges that the caliper grabs, and lastly i'd beef up the caliper a little to grab more disc. you have this fat racing disc and the caliper appears to only grab a little edge of it (unless i just cant see clear enough.) i guess that about wraps it up for me. keep up the great work, i look forward to seeing more progress!
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by Stromberg » Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:57 am
Thanks for the comment, well i have done some more on it.. a very small update, made the rim edge slimmer, and the caliper a bit more beefy
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by Stromberg » Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:44 pm
New render
It's not very good, but it's something, please comment
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by CTZn » Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:53 pm
nice move, I like it !
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by Stromberg » Sun Mar 22, 2009 1:20 am
Glad you like it CTZn
Here is a cleaner version, no post-pro.
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