Hey tannerw_2010 nice first one for sure !
What took my eye immediatly is... damn, I couldn't read your picture ! It took me some time to grab that the liquid was falling onto a reflective surface (wich in my mind was just the ground further), and believe it or not but I had to read about the glass to see it
Ok, now what's wrong ? Lines, alignement, perspective. The glass itself is vanishing half in the vertical lines, half in the horizontal ones frome the sink.
1 - avoid aligning camera with big shapes (and the glass with the desk too), change camera position.
2 - the window is too low and the background is upside down, that does matter for human brain.
Optionally boost mid tones, there's a lot of contrast, Indirect lighting is not perceptible. That's bidir only ?