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Post by neo0. » Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:06 am

Thanks to woody for the modelling advice.

Here is the start
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Post by Borgleader » Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:11 am

A few crits:

1. This one is more of a suggestion, make it 5x2 ?
2. The pill "bubbles" should have more of a hanger shape. An arc like shape on the lenght and flat ends.
3. There should be more space between the "bubbles"
4. The base looks a tad too thick. And a bit too rounded/soft on the edges. This is usually a sheet of plastic cut by mechanical knives (see "How it's made" on the discovery channel :wink: )

It's good to see you actually got it "off the ground". Godd luck with the rest of it.
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Post by dougal2 » Sat Aug 02, 2008 12:11 pm

Borgleader wrote:(see "How it's made" on the discovery channel :wink: )
also "How stuff's made" and "How do they do it?". I must admit they're about the only programs i've watched on telly in the last couple of months.

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Post by neo0. » Sat Aug 02, 2008 4:05 pm

Just to clear up some things, what im modelling here is a dentyne ice pack.

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Post by Borgleader » Sun Aug 03, 2008 12:08 am

Then why did you :

1.Show a medicinal package in the other thread.
2.Call this thread medicine?
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Post by Deus » Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:56 am

Borgleader wrote:Then why did you :

1.Show a medicinal package in the other thread.
2.Call this thread medicine?
PWNED :twisted:

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Post by PureSpider » Sun Aug 03, 2008 2:09 am

fail.

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Post by zsouthboy » Sun Aug 03, 2008 2:23 am

Well, technically he just said how to model a blister package (which the dentyne package is) in the other thread...

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Post by Borgleader » Sun Aug 03, 2008 2:25 am

zsouthboy wrote:Well, technically he just said how to model a blister package (which the dentyne package is) in the other thread...
Well yeah but you can understand my confusion as this current thread IS called Medicine (and dentine packages are easy to find, he could've shown us that from the start)
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Post by Stinkie » Sun Aug 03, 2008 4:23 am

lol. Dudes ... you gotta get out more.

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Post by Woodie » Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:09 pm

Don't worry just continue. Do you reference it with something (photo)? Keep right proportions and you will be OK.

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Post by neo0. » Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:30 am

1.Show a medicinal package in the other thread.
2.Call this thread medicine?
There isn't a decently sized pic that showed what I want.

I felt like a generic name would help more people to relate..

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Post by Borgleader » Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:56 am

http://www.northerner.com/pic_large/firebreak.jpg

Hard to believe you couldnt find a right sized gum package picture, but fine. If thats what you were after than most of my crits dont apply. But still the name of your thread couldve been "Gum Package", woulve made things much much clearer from the start.
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Post by neo0. » Tue Aug 05, 2008 3:32 pm

Latest update.

Obviously, jack daniels is supposed to be orange not red and Im not quite happy with the layout, but besides that im happy with how its comming along.

Crits welcome.
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Post by Zom-B » Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:49 pm

neo0. wrote:Crits welcome.
Phuuu.... where to start???! I'm sure even you can see some stuff that need serious Help!

Finish one thing, that start the other!

Otherwise you torture the viewers eye with a bunch of unfinished loveless pieces thrown together.

Also please take care of some better studio that a plane lit by sun....
my poor eyes :roll:

Try a simple beveled Studio BG with env map lightning, this would bring some love in your WIP scenes ;-)
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