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StompinTom
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Post by StompinTom » Tue Jul 15, 2008 1:37 pm

real modern living: beds with melted cheese instead of blankets!

overall it looks nice, but its missing connection details and bumps here n there to make it believable. i would also play around with tonemapping settings cuz it looks very raw and burned out right now.

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Post by CTZn » Tue Jul 15, 2008 2:48 pm

Behrendt: I hope this is not too late :P : I meant diffuse_transmitter !
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Post by Behrendt » Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:27 am

Unfortunately it was too late for this render, tried a blend mat with Carpet and 0-Mat, but as displaced materials can't be blended, I had to use the material as it was. But I lowered the displace value as proposed. I'll give your idea a try in the next wip-shots, but I hope there aren't that many to come, want to bring this picture to an end. And sorry for *.png I posted before, forgot to save it as *.jpg.. :shock:
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Post by BbB » Wed Jul 16, 2008 2:51 am

Carpet now looking very good imo.
Wall is a bit tough on the eye, though the idea of the patterns is nice. Why not pick a colour more in line with the rest of the scheme?
I'd pump up exponent and IOR (mainly IOR) on your wood if I were you tone down the exponent mat. These wood panels are highly polished.
You can blend displaced mats. Just make sure only the parent mat has displacement.

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Post by Borgleader » Wed Jul 16, 2008 4:48 am

Big improvement :) And +1 to BbB's crits.

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Post by Kram1032 » Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:21 am

I guess so, although if I hear translucent, in my ears that sounds like either glossy transparent or diffuse transmitter or SSS...

transPARent is what he meant, I guess...

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Post by Behrendt » Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:02 am

So, a final is on its way, and I think it's looking good, so stay stuned, in 24hrs I maybe got enough spp to show. :lol:

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