Interior WIP
- kwistenbiebel
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Thanks.
Metapixel, I pretty much used the default settings. I set the background to black, and used Whaat's presets on the materials. Those I tweaked a little. That's it. Nothing to it, really. Easy as pie.
This needs more work, though. Need to change the concrete texture (boring), the bulbs need some more work (position and power), the boards have too much bump, and the sculpture (a Manfred Pernice) needs bevelling. And I need to figure out how SSS works (for the flowers).
Anyone anything else to add?
Metapixel, I pretty much used the default settings. I set the background to black, and used Whaat's presets on the materials. Those I tweaked a little. That's it. Nothing to it, really. Easy as pie.
This needs more work, though. Need to change the concrete texture (boring), the bulbs need some more work (position and power), the boards have too much bump, and the sculpture (a Manfred Pernice) needs bevelling. And I need to figure out how SSS works (for the flowers).
Anyone anything else to add?
Nah, that would improve the scene already a lot.
I really dig the lamps on the ceiling, those wires are nice and playful. I also like the camera being rotated a bit on the z axes of it, also adds something playful. IMO the table is a bit too low and the wall in the back too busy, I'm not sure if a decrease in the bump strength will make it better. It's not really clear it has shelves in it now. Maybe if you wish to leave it like so, you could modify the material in the back of the shelves. So give the part I've marked a less busy, material.
Now that I've cropped the image a bit, I must say I find this cropped version also cool. What I mean is that perhaps you could make your camera more zoomed in to the scene to cut away all uninteresting bits, no harm meant. I do wish to see the sculpture in the image of course, that one is cool
Flowers are cool.
I really dig the lamps on the ceiling, those wires are nice and playful. I also like the camera being rotated a bit on the z axes of it, also adds something playful. IMO the table is a bit too low and the wall in the back too busy, I'm not sure if a decrease in the bump strength will make it better. It's not really clear it has shelves in it now. Maybe if you wish to leave it like so, you could modify the material in the back of the shelves. So give the part I've marked a less busy, material.
Now that I've cropped the image a bit, I must say I find this cropped version also cool. What I mean is that perhaps you could make your camera more zoomed in to the scene to cut away all uninteresting bits, no harm meant. I do wish to see the sculpture in the image of course, that one is cool
Flowers are cool.
Sander "Roger" Wit
The Netherlands
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- Neobloodline
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@ Roger: I agree, although I would like to keep the boards (but not behind the shelves).
@ Neobloodline: your aversion of interior renders is well known. Thanks.
Oh yeah, I tried to use the camera (instead of Reinhard) for the first time. Got this message: SceneLoaderExcep: Found unexpected element 'response_funcion_path' in element 'Camera' (Around line 19, column 17).
Qué?
@ Neobloodline: your aversion of interior renders is well known. Thanks.
Oh yeah, I tried to use the camera (instead of Reinhard) for the first time. Got this message: SceneLoaderExcep: Found unexpected element 'response_funcion_path' in element 'Camera' (Around line 19, column 17).
Qué?
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