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manitwo
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by manitwo » Sat Sep 16, 2006 10:05 pm
Enough testing, time for a real project
The model still needs a bit tweaking
I'll try to make a picture with a artistic feeling in it.
First WIP:
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C&C are very welcome
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Camox
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by Camox » Sun Sep 17, 2006 1:13 am
That is a photo, or ?
Absolutely successfully, nice !
You also selected the correct beer mark, I love guinness !
cheers
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by psor » Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:17 am
This is looking topnotch! A good first step ...
take care
psor
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manitwo
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by manitwo » Sun Sep 17, 2006 9:03 pm
Second WIP:
Only testing some new textures
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by Kosmokrator » Mon Sep 18, 2006 4:32 am
I LIKE THE SECOND TEXTURES!MORE REALISTIC!nice work
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by bq1 » Tue Sep 19, 2006 6:16 am
Excellent. Looks very tasty!
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by tungee » Tue Sep 19, 2006 7:04 am
becks!
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by richie » Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:01 am
second pic looks perfect, more textures and metal is better, maybe you could add some few dof for the final pic
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manitwo
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by manitwo » Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:10 am
there is actually a bit dof (hardly visible)
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by richie » Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:21 am
haha! yes i could discern the very fine dof just after posting, nice detail.
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manitwo
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by manitwo » Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:39 pm
not much different, anyway ... this time with ground texture a tiny bit more dof and no color/contrast correction, only neatimage!
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by tungee » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:00 pm
manitwo,
this looks like a photo, like a pro advertisment.
cheers
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by richie » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:27 pm
no crits on cans, but the ground reminds me of the yafray GI blotching artefacts.
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manitwo
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by manitwo » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:47 pm
thank you guys
i tried to give the picture some depht with the ground texture and i think it works (compare the new one with the old ones).
thank you for your crit richie, interesting
Who think the same?
Maybe i should choose another ground
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by tungee » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:49 pm
the ground is fine!
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