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Post by manitwo » Sat Sep 16, 2006 10:05 pm

Enough testing, time for a real project :)
The model still needs a bit tweaking
I'll try to make a picture with a artistic feeling in it.

First WIP:
Guinness Cans
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C&C are very welcome :wink:

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Post by Camox » Sun Sep 17, 2006 1:13 am

:shock: That is a photo, or ? :roll: Absolutely successfully, nice !
You also selected the correct beer mark, I love guinness ! :D

cheers :wink:

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Post by psor » Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:17 am

This is looking topnotch! A good first step ... :P :D :D ;)


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Post by manitwo » Sun Sep 17, 2006 9:03 pm

Second WIP:
Only testing some new textures
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Post by Kosmokrator » Mon Sep 18, 2006 4:32 am

I LIKE THE SECOND TEXTURES!MORE REALISTIC!nice work
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Post by bq1 » Tue Sep 19, 2006 6:16 am

Excellent. Looks very tasty! :D

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Post by tungee » Tue Sep 19, 2006 7:04 am

becks!

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Post by richie » Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:01 am

second pic looks perfect, more textures and metal is better, maybe you could add some few dof for the final pic :)

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Post by manitwo » Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:10 am

there is actually a bit dof (hardly visible) 8) :lol:

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Post by richie » Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:21 am

haha! yes i could discern the very fine dof just after posting, nice detail.

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Post by manitwo » Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:39 pm

not much different, anyway ... this time with ground texture a tiny bit more dof and no color/contrast correction, only neatimage!

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Post by tungee » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:00 pm

manitwo,
this looks like a photo, like a pro advertisment.

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Post by richie » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:27 pm

no crits on cans, but the ground reminds me of the yafray GI blotching artefacts.

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Post by manitwo » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:47 pm

thank you guys :D
i tried to give the picture some depht with the ground texture and i think it works (compare the new one with the old ones).
thank you for your crit richie, interesting :? :)
Who think the same?
Maybe i should choose another ground :)
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Post by tungee » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:49 pm

the ground is fine!

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