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sciman
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by sciman » Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:23 am
Hi,
Here is my first try at an interior scene in indigo. Anything obviously wrong or out of place in it? (I do need to add chairs though)
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Behrendt
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by Behrendt » Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:42 am
I think you made a nice start with Indigo but you definitely have to improve your modelling skills and your feeling for a good scene. You'll never find a setting like you rendered it. There are many wrong scales and so on! Look for reference images and for measures of objects you want to model.
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mrCarnivore
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by mrCarnivore » Fri Aug 24, 2007 1:46 am
Not bad for a first scene.
You should have posted that render in the "work in progress" thread, though.
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zsouthboy
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by zsouthboy » Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:36 am
Does anyone else have a huge crush on Emma Watson?
Just me then?
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by Kram1032 » Fri Aug 24, 2007 4:14 am
nice 1st
look at the forks and the knifes
they're quite misshaped.
you need to overwork your grass outdoor: it's not dense enough
and you either have to lower the brightness of the TV or double tonemap the scene....
the TV hangs pretty high / the table and the window are too low (in 2nd case, the table also is too small) and needs boxes ^^
else, I'd say, it should be quite fine
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sciman
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by sciman » Fri Aug 24, 2007 11:17 am
Ok, Thanks everyone.
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deltaepsylon
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by deltaepsylon » Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:46 pm
zsouthboy wrote:Does anyone else have a huge crush on Emma Watson?
Just me then?
well.... the movie hermione is ...not good
the real emma watson is.... above average
jk lol, id say 7/10
and ive seen 10's at my school
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eman7613
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by eman7613 » Fri Aug 24, 2007 1:00 pm
LIke it so far, jsut two metnions.
1.) the outisde needs a tree or something visable. like a lawn chair.
2.) remove the food place that is closest TV, no one has eyes back there
Yes i know, my spelling sucks
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mrCarnivore
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by mrCarnivore » Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:59 pm
Is that really a window? I thought it was just a photograph of a green lawn hanging on the wall...
If it IS a window, you should make the outside brighter. Otherwise it's ok.
Just have to make the wineglasses bigger.
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by StompinTom » Sat Aug 25, 2007 1:47 am
change the camera angle. the lighting is also very fruity. the scene doesnt have a focal point as of yet, try to arrange the table/tv/camera in a different way to get a nice composition.
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sciman
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by sciman » Wed Sep 12, 2007 1:39 pm
Ok, thanks for the suggestions, I'll try changing some stuff, and post a new image. It may not be for a while though, with school starting and whatnot.
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