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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Pibuz » Fri Oct 25, 2013 8:40 pm

The general mood is really wonderful!

..maybe the car seems to be too still, if compared to the motion blur of the surroundings..

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Fri Oct 25, 2013 9:41 pm

I think you're right about that. Also I get the feeling that the right side of the car is too illuminated, considering it's turned away from the sun. I'll try to do a remix when I get home. :)

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Zom-B » Fri Oct 25, 2013 11:41 pm

Oscar J wrote:Please tell me what you think of this one.
Great as always ;)

Only thing that strikes me is the sharp shadow on the grass. Since the grass is not Flat, the shadow shouldbe some how distorted there.... don't ask how ^^
Simply adjust the sun, so that the shadow does hit the street only!
The street ground material for the shadow pass also NEEDS some bump or normal mapping, so the Shadow penumbra gets distorted a little and is not so perfectly sharp anymore.
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Juju » Sat Oct 26, 2013 12:04 am

Oscar J wrote:Please tell me what you think of this one.
is this one of those new driverless cars?! :wink:
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Sat Oct 26, 2013 1:48 am

Thanks guys for your crits!

Final version - with changes including a suggestion of a driver, and less sharp shadows. Hope you like it!
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by lycium » Sat Oct 26, 2013 2:24 am

The Photoshop lens flare might be a little too sharp/overt, but overall it looks really great! Straight out of a magazine, just needs some white text and the AM logo in the bottom :)

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Sat Oct 26, 2013 3:00 am

lycium wrote: Straight out of a magazine, just needs some white text and the AM logo in the bottom :)
I'm so happy to hear you say that, because that's what I was going for!

Flare might be a subject of personal preference, but I definitely see your point. Like it better now?

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by zeitmeister » Mon Oct 28, 2013 7:19 pm

Great!
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Mon Nov 18, 2013 6:59 am

Been working all day with light placement on this one - wheels look odd, and theres no ground or window reflections yet, but I hope you can see some potential.
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by OnoSendai » Mon Nov 18, 2013 7:10 am

Looks promising indeed :)

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by bubs » Tue Nov 19, 2013 3:24 am

I particularly like the smiley face in the window! :wink:

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Sun Nov 24, 2013 3:34 am

Thanks. Here's an update. Not loving the side window reflection ATM, will work on that.
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Sun Nov 24, 2013 9:31 am

Better background?
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Sroka8888 » Mon Nov 25, 2013 4:59 am

Very nice :wink: only background looks like 8bit ( see gradient steps ) or this is light steps ? you save to 8 or 16 or 32 bit?
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Mon Nov 25, 2013 6:25 am

Very true. I saved it as a png, which I suspect is 8-bit. I'll try to convert it to 16-but in PS and fix the stepping. Thanks! :D

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