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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by FoXar » Wed Aug 07, 2013 11:56 pm

Superb! I do agree with the comments of other people here, and I got one more;

The curve of the side window is quite segmented (I can count 6 segments there :mrgreen: )

And besides some minor technical glitches, the mood, camera angle, colors are just outrageously good, and I think that's the hardest part, capturing a certain mood on a digital drawing. Keep us posted!
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Thu Aug 08, 2013 1:22 am

Thanks a lot guys, I agree with most of the crits - though I can't do much about the backplate features (i.e. road and motion blur) and I'm trying to achieve an advertisement look, so I won't be adding any dirt. Furthermore, the brake disc is already rotating.

I'll look into the rest. :)

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by CTZn » Thu Aug 08, 2013 1:39 am

My take is that the background plate was taken with a spinning camera, wich means that the camera may need some relative motion compared with that of the car (if any, but none is the weirdest).
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Thu Aug 08, 2013 9:48 am

Is this an improvement?
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Mor4us » Thu Aug 08, 2013 10:14 am

wow, this is one one of the best car renderings i've seen, happy it was done with indigo ;)
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Thu Aug 08, 2013 10:26 am

I'm so glad you like it!

Here's a 10 minute render of a front shot I'm working on.
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by zeitmeister » Thu Aug 08, 2013 10:25 pm

Hell yeah!
Put the headlights on!

Is this a 3D environment? Looks like VirtualRig... :)
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Fri Aug 09, 2013 5:58 am

Good eyes :wink:
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by zeitmeister » Fri Aug 09, 2013 10:07 am

Hehe, concerning headlights or VR? ;)

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Fri Aug 09, 2013 10:19 am

VR. thanks, more happy with the rear shot though. :)

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by CTZn » Fri Aug 09, 2013 11:38 am

* miaowing *
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by CTZn » Fri Aug 09, 2013 1:20 pm

CTZn wrote:* miaowing *
One lame post about a bag and a cat :)

There was this weirdness on the side bandings that I could only understand as a twisted camera motion but ... this, can more vectors be added or is it a design twist, like photograph models with subtly diverging eyes ?
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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Oscar J » Fri Aug 09, 2013 6:21 pm

CTZn wrote:* miaowing *
You're a mystery to me sometimes. :)

I can't explain the look of the background image, and, quite frankly, I don't think it matters that much. I just want to capture a certain feeling with my renders, in which the car is supposed to be the central part. :wink:

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by Voytech » Fri Aug 09, 2013 11:30 pm

Not that it counts for anything, but I prefer the front shot.

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Re: Oscar's rendering thread

Post by CTZn » Sat Aug 10, 2013 1:09 am

Oscar J wrote:
CTZn wrote:* miaowing *
You're a mystery to me sometimes. :)

I can't explain the look of the background image, and, quite frankly, I don't think it matters that much. I just want to capture a certain feeling with my renders, in which the car is supposed to be the central part. :wink:
I know I can be cryptic (if not trollesque), that's why I double posted. You are doing well of course :)
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