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Post by SmartDen » Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:05 am

I love IndiGO!
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Post by CTZn » Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:15 am

Harsh and straight:

Shadows are too dark, maybe dof is a bit too strong (maybe not); black beans look just plain black and can hardly be distinguished from their shadow. Beans are intersecting in the pot.

That was for crits, for comments well I like the idea :)

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Post by SmartDen » Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:26 am

Uups... I send an old picture i lit this area light. Here is a newer one with Exr-lighting
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Post by suvakas » Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:44 am

Looks good. Maby a bit too empty for my taste, but much better than the first one.

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Post by SmartDen » Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:55 am

suvakas wrote:Looks good. Maby a bit too empty for my taste, but much better than the first one.
I found it a little bit empty too. :? Any suggestions?

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Post by Maluminas » Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:58 am

The white beans hurt my eyes :shock: they are a bit too saturated. Otherwise its very good :)

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Post by Moses » Wed Jan 10, 2007 1:12 pm

Perhaps change the camera angle with a shot of the beans and pot taking up most of the view. It may make it look a little less empty.

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Post by suvakas » Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:11 am

Yes, i'm with Moses. Try to play with the pot and the camera angle.

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