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competition - brio

Post by hstokholm » Sat Jan 06, 2007 11:42 am

Hi there...

I have started thinking about what to do for the indigo competition, and like usual I had no ideas, so I just started modeling the first toy I could find in the house :)

EDIT:

new render

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This is just a quicky, but you get the idea... A more clean version will come tomorrow... I don't know why the metal in the wheels turned black, but I will investigate that later...

good night from here...

Heine

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Post by hstokholm » Sun Jan 07, 2007 2:50 am

just a 5 minutes render....

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still figuring out where i'm going with this... maybe some cowboys vs indians ..?

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Post by jansan » Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:27 am

THE Competition RULES:

- You can only submit 1 image per user.
Be carefull to submit your image in it's final state as once
submitted, there is no way back

¿?


Or I am mistaken and if WIP can be sent?

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Post by hstokholm » Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:32 am

These are just WIP's... I think he means the entry's posted in the Entry thread...

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Post by Behrendt » Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:33 am

This is a WIP Forum mate :lol:
You can only submit 1 Final Image and those aren't Finals I guess :wink:
edit:
too slow :D

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Post by surreal » Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:39 am

Murder by Brio.. how morbidly fascinationg! haha it's looking good man :)

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Post by hstokholm » Sun Jan 07, 2007 12:48 pm

thanks for the reply :)

This is just a render that has cooked a little longer...

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there are some normals errors, but they should be easy to fix... and the men appears to be floating :roll:

4 hours to work, so goodnight from here...

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Post by BZ Win » Sun Jan 07, 2007 1:37 pm

Tie him to the track :twisted:

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Post by hstokholm » Sat Jan 13, 2007 1:04 pm

BZ Win wrote:Tie him to the track :twisted:
exactly :twisted:

Just a small update... haven't had much time to play with it...

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I have made the rails lighter since this render...

Heine

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Post by manitwo » Sat Jan 13, 2007 1:27 pm

this is much better! better colors, better dof, better ... simply better :wink:

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Post by Xman » Sat Jan 13, 2007 1:54 pm

first picture, is the Render of art :D
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Post by CTZn » Sat Jan 13, 2007 2:47 pm

hstokholm wrote:
BZ Win wrote:Tie him to the track :twisted:
exactly :twisted:
:lol: how sadistic !

Would be cool to see some more features or props on the floor, walls or something, like a current plug or some others toys or... you see what I mean ? not much but just to give more credit to the composition ;)

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Post by hstokholm » Mon Jan 15, 2007 1:47 am

Thanks guys :)

I will be putting some more stuff in the background... maybe some a lego train station or something like that... There will probably go some time before I post updates.. I have to make a science project about navier stokes equations and I am not quit sure how to handle that :P

But enough of my whining about school.. Thanks for your suggestions and bye from here...

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Post by hstokholm » Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:19 am

Again a small update:
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I am trying to build a brio trainstation if you can't tell what it is :)

I have fixed the problems at the bench, and the tape going through the ground :roll: and i'm rerendering the image now... But if you have more suggestions please don't afraid to say :D

EDIT:

New image that fixes most of the problem mentioned... But the tape still looks funky :)

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Post by tungee » Thu Jan 25, 2007 6:38 am

looks very good.
i like playmobils!
hstokholm from denmark?
Music has the right to children!

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