My first living-room
My first living-room
Hi all!
I haven't posted anything for a while - busy bringing together everything I've learnt so far...
Well, I know it's not perfect at all, and to be honest the only things I'm quite happy with are the plates and the fabric's texture on the chairs' seats
Please comment, I need feedback!
See ya guys!
I haven't posted anything for a while - busy bringing together everything I've learnt so far...
Well, I know it's not perfect at all, and to be honest the only things I'm quite happy with are the plates and the fabric's texture on the chairs' seats
Please comment, I need feedback!
See ya guys!
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Re: My first living-room
Lovely render - did you use camera tonemapping or reinhard?
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Re: My first living-room
Hi Madcoo!
The overall image is nice, but it really cries for enhancements: don't get bored with this!!!!
First thing, could you post a smaller jpeg image next time? This way the load on the forum and site will be a little released.
Some critics on the image: I feel it pinky! Try changing the white point to D65 and you will notice some less saturated greyscale-oriented tones, which usually work better in my opinion.
I agree with you about the ceramic of the dishes, it's great. But you absolutely have to work on the FLOOR (which I consider among the most important things when doing interiors), on the wood of the chairs and the picture frame on the left (I can't even see a glass).
One last thing: the scene seems a little overscaled: I mean, it's a very wide space, filled with only few things. Either add more stuff or scale down the spaces!
I expect you to work on this Madcoo: could be a really interesting image!
The overall image is nice, but it really cries for enhancements: don't get bored with this!!!!
First thing, could you post a smaller jpeg image next time? This way the load on the forum and site will be a little released.
Some critics on the image: I feel it pinky! Try changing the white point to D65 and you will notice some less saturated greyscale-oriented tones, which usually work better in my opinion.
I agree with you about the ceramic of the dishes, it's great. But you absolutely have to work on the FLOOR (which I consider among the most important things when doing interiors), on the wood of the chairs and the picture frame on the left (I can't even see a glass).
One last thing: the scene seems a little overscaled: I mean, it's a very wide space, filled with only few things. Either add more stuff or scale down the spaces!
I expect you to work on this Madcoo: could be a really interesting image!
Re: My first living-room
Nice image !
I agree with Pibuz, that changing the white balance to something more neutral makes it look better.
I did some quick color adjusting just to illustrate the idea. I hope you don't mind madcoo ?
I agree with Pibuz, that changing the white balance to something more neutral makes it look better.
I did some quick color adjusting just to illustrate the idea. I hope you don't mind madcoo ?
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Re: My first living-room
I don't mind at all suvakas, on the contrary!!!
It looks better this way indeed...
The reason why the overall colouring was pinkish or yellowish, was because I wanted to give it a "dusk" feel.
Obviously, next time I try to get that kind of result I'll just play with the sun's horizontal direction.
Many thanks again for your comms guys!
It looks better this way indeed...
The reason why the overall colouring was pinkish or yellowish, was because I wanted to give it a "dusk" feel.
Obviously, next time I try to get that kind of result I'll just play with the sun's horizontal direction.
Many thanks again for your comms guys!
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Re: My first living-room
Hi Madcoo.
I like your living-room scene. I´m waiting to see next rendering with a glass added to the picture and a more reflective wooden floor.
Cheers!
I like your living-room scene. I´m waiting to see next rendering with a glass added to the picture and a more reflective wooden floor.
Cheers!
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Re: My first living-room
A lot better, indeed. Thanks Suv.suvakas wrote:Nice image !
I agree with Pibuz, that changing the white balance to something more neutral makes it look better.
Also, the smaller image helps me a lot to have a more straight idea of the feeling of the whole image: cursors really freak me out...
Re: My first living-room
Changed the picture's size!!!
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Re: My first living-room
I'm prefering the former color balance, to differ. Feels natural to me with the sun set...
I think it's the wall depth wich is biasing the perception of scale, make it thinner perhaps, or further ?
I agree that the porcelain looks great, nice scene !
I think it's the wall depth wich is biasing the perception of scale, make it thinner perhaps, or further ?
I agree that the porcelain looks great, nice scene !
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