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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by Silmä » Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:26 am

Thanks guys.

Here's a little close-up of Tapio decanter, by Tapio Wirkkala 1952. The neck should be a bit thicker, though.

It has more polygons than the rest of the scene, so I don't know if I'm going to keep it...
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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by Godzilla » Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:26 am

Amazing render... if you render it longer it would be gallery-worthy in my opinion.

If you send me the .igs file I'll render it for you :wink:
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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by Silmä » Sat Oct 03, 2009 4:04 am

I've not modeled anything for a while, but i got my new computer today and made a quick half an hour render to test it while installing games and stuff. It's over 4 times faster than my old laptop, so I'm pretty happy with it :)

Now I'll just have to wait for benn to help me get rid of that indigo-tag on the lower corner...
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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by Sparlin » Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:19 am

Could still do with a bit longer rendering; as its still a bit grainy!

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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by Silmä » Wed Oct 07, 2009 1:48 am

Still a bit more details and longer render. I'm beginning to be ready to call it done now.
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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by Nick » Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:16 am

Fantastic render, silma! :wink:

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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by suvakas » Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:50 am

Yes, very nice.
I love closeup and DOF shots like this.

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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by Silmä » Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:32 am

Thanks Nick and Suvakas!

Here's one last shot from other angle.
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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by Pibuz » Wed Oct 07, 2009 10:02 am

They're both wonderful silma, though the second one lacks the intensity of the first.
I must agree with Suv: I like your extreme DOF setting.
The second one is great too, don't get me wrong. It's only that it seems still a little empty, that's it maybe. BTW great work.

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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by matsta » Wed Oct 07, 2009 10:27 am

Looking great man!

one thing, the chair ads a nice something to the image, just a suggestion, zoom out a tad and line up the angle of the top of the chair with the edge of the counter. Great composition is about angles! Loving the lighting.

Great work

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Re: apartment/kitchen

Post by zeitmeister » Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:14 pm

Love it!
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