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chubakueno
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Pool

Post by chubakueno » Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:07 am

My first decent image. All the measures are real.
Crits are welcome
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CoolColJ
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Re: Pool

Post by CoolColJ » Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:48 pm

looks a bit too blue :D
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dakiru
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Re: Pool

Post by dakiru » Sat Oct 17, 2009 2:01 pm

chubakueno wrote:My first decent image. All the measures are real.
Crits are welcome
Water looks good. Just few things to think of :wink: :

Why windows, when there is no ceiling?
Deck chairs look wide and the umbrella doesn't cover well from sun (or rain).
Texture around the pool looks like there is no bump.
Some bevels around may help
Yeah and thinner stick for the umbrella
There are small tiles visible in the nearest right part of the pool, where they don't have to be in real.
Maybe panorama outside? But that's just about feeling :) :wink:
And how will you get to the deck chairs when you come from the other side? The only option is through the pool. That's OK, but if it's a waitress bringing you a drink? :mrgreen:
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