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Schosch
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Interior

Post by Schosch » Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:28 pm

This is an interior scene I am currently working on.
There still is some noise visible in certain areas because I only let it render for about two or three hours.

Criticism is welcome! :)
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Re: Interior

Post by Stinkie » Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:30 am

I quite like it, but you gotta lose that sofa.

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Re: Interior

Post by Jambert » Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:19 am

Stinkie wrote:I quite like it, but you gotta lose that sofa.
Yes, there is too much bump on sofa. But the render is realy good :)

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Re: Interior

Post by Nick » Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:37 am

Yeah, less bump on sofa...and i think che lamp color is too similar to the walls!

Bute i like it, congratulation :D

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Re: Interior

Post by Pibuz » Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:56 am

Great scene Schosch!
I always like to see interior shots :D :D :D

I find that a more dramatic lighting would really help a lot here! Try to light up the lamp, and to make the light coming from the outside a little blueish! I see great potential here!

..perhaps adding a little more reflectivity to the floor...

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Re: Interior

Post by Schosch » Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:09 am

Thanks for the tips everyone! :D
I'll post an update tomorrow.

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Re: Interior

Post by Schosch » Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:28 pm

Here is the update as promised.
I changed the floor texture and the overall lighting.
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Re: Interior

Post by Stromberg » Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:46 am

Love this scene, has such a nice feeling to it :)

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Re: Interior

Post by Phr0stByte » Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:03 am

Bump in the sofa is still a little big - grain as well. Maybe try a cloth texture? The rest of the scene is real nice!

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