Beginner interior

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Re: Beginner interior

Post by Borgleader » Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:29 am

Getting better but... those shelf planks (i just noticed) look really thick O.o You'd expect them to be like an inch thick not like 4-5.

The couch leather material seems a bit too reflective to me. And the bar uvs still look weird to me.
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Re: Beginner interior

Post by 3D Geek » Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:06 pm

how about this?
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Re: Beginner interior

Post by Borgleader » Sun Jul 26, 2009 1:58 pm

Couch mat is better, bar uvs look better but the shelf still needs work, and it empty too :wink:
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Re: Beginner interior

Post by 3D Geek » Sun Jul 26, 2009 2:52 pm

ok here
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Re: Beginner interior

Post by Borgleader » Sun Jul 26, 2009 3:13 pm

1. Why is that room open ended?
2. Could you actually post a render that is noise free? Some of the details are hard to make out with such low spp.
3. Metal table & shelf need some reworking.
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Re: Beginner interior

Post by 3D Geek » Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:35 am

Is this better?
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Re: Beginner interior

Post by Borgleader » Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:39 am

Yeah definitely. Hmm well not to be honest it comes down to tweaking. And adding smaller objects that while not being the center of attention will add that extra bit of realism. For example that shelf of yours is empty and the sides of it look awfully fat. Also maybe go back to env map lighting, or add extra stuff outside the room. And I don't see the glass in your windows?
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Re: Beginner interior

Post by 3D Geek » Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:11 pm

ok i think im going to call this done after a little more tweaking.
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Re: Beginner interior

Post by Borgleader » Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:41 pm

Make sure your final render is noise free, not one grain of it ;)
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