Trying floors
Hi guys! I feel like this is not a floor test scene anymore..
I'm kind of affectionated to this scene!
So, I'm still planning a few changes: the spot light on the right is a little annoying and doesn't even seem to be turned on, the right picture is too big, the cart is empty..
Next challenge is the fruit vase: i'm gonna try to fill it with oranges, let's see what comes out!
Then I'll add a piece of furniture on the far right, under the table againsta the wall, and perhaps some objects over the high plasterboard shelf.
5 hours of calculation on a Q6600, 4GB RAM, WinXP
No post process, apart from a very subtle sharpening.
As always, any suggestion would be much appreciated!
I'm kind of affectionated to this scene!
So, I'm still planning a few changes: the spot light on the right is a little annoying and doesn't even seem to be turned on, the right picture is too big, the cart is empty..
Next challenge is the fruit vase: i'm gonna try to fill it with oranges, let's see what comes out!
Then I'll add a piece of furniture on the far right, under the table againsta the wall, and perhaps some objects over the high plasterboard shelf.
5 hours of calculation on a Q6600, 4GB RAM, WinXP
No post process, apart from a very subtle sharpening.
As always, any suggestion would be much appreciated!
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> suggestions..
yeah ok you probably wont like this idea but how about a coat draped over the cart and a hat fallen on the floor - suggestive of some activity/absent person.
I have seen quite a few of these very neat decorator shots now and I think they are missing something.
Your scene is so nice how about making a still life painterly surreal type thing out of it
apologies for MS Paint hack I am not a good artist either
yeah ok you probably wont like this idea but how about a coat draped over the cart and a hat fallen on the floor - suggestive of some activity/absent person.
I have seen quite a few of these very neat decorator shots now and I think they are missing something.
Your scene is so nice how about making a still life painterly surreal type thing out of it
apologies for MS Paint hack I am not a good artist either
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Suvakas: I though about it: that's why my plaster wall is treated with "marmorino", a kind of finishing easy washable
The render is still VERY far from the conclusion, so you can't see the wall reflections..
But still I'll think about it! Thank you!
Borgleader: don't think I'm so talented, man. This svene is done with a LOT of patience and Indigo (oh; it's great...)
Big Fan: thank you man for the tip. I was wondering it myself, helped by observations from my mom (who really likes to give advices about all concerning kitchens: even CG!!!). Problem is that sketchy hardly handles geometry such as towels etcetera, but I'll give it a try, why not? On the other hand, modeling the oranges (next up) has already been such an emotional hell, so...
Wytraven: thank you Wyt, you're so kind!
The render is still VERY far from the conclusion, so you can't see the wall reflections..
But still I'll think about it! Thank you!
Borgleader: don't think I'm so talented, man. This svene is done with a LOT of patience and Indigo (oh; it's great...)
Big Fan: thank you man for the tip. I was wondering it myself, helped by observations from my mom (who really likes to give advices about all concerning kitchens: even CG!!!). Problem is that sketchy hardly handles geometry such as towels etcetera, but I'll give it a try, why not? On the other hand, modeling the oranges (next up) has already been such an emotional hell, so...
Wytraven: thank you Wyt, you're so kind!
A little up: I tried to make the scene a bit more "chaotic", added some objects like spice cans (modeled on the base of a real one I have in my kitchen), candle box, reintroduced magazines, and added a tile finishing to the wall (the material appears to be interesting, with very subtle bumps, but the rendered cooked for only 8 hours so the effect isn't so clear yet..)..
...Oh, and I modeled oranges too!
..still I'm not very satisfied..It lacks something...Guys: say yours!
BTW, little postpro for sharpening and a little chromatic aberration.
Original size 2300x2300 ('cos bigger caused indigo 32bits to crash: i'm gonna test the scene with linux 64bits once i get the right libraries to run )
...Oh, and I modeled oranges too!
..still I'm not very satisfied..It lacks something...Guys: say yours!
BTW, little postpro for sharpening and a little chromatic aberration.
Original size 2300x2300 ('cos bigger caused indigo 32bits to crash: i'm gonna test the scene with linux 64bits once i get the right libraries to run )
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Hi Psy!
You're right about both your questions..
I wasn't so fond of the tiles myself, so in the current cooking version there are small beige square tiles (not enaugh reflective, damn it), I'll post an update of an almost-finished version on monday.
Well, about the skirting board, i know it's too high..
But the level of detail is copied from an architecture review, i liked it simple..
You know, i love minimalism..
Perhaps it's just...TOO MINIMAL!
BTW thank you for your feedback!
You're right about both your questions..
I wasn't so fond of the tiles myself, so in the current cooking version there are small beige square tiles (not enaugh reflective, damn it), I'll post an update of an almost-finished version on monday.
Well, about the skirting board, i know it's too high..
But the level of detail is copied from an architecture review, i liked it simple..
You know, i love minimalism..
Perhaps it's just...TOO MINIMAL!
BTW thank you for your feedback!
hi pibuz
nice image and nice view.
personnaly i like the contrast between the black tiles and the white walls, mixed with some little touch of orange. nice color composition job
my only regrets are the 3 lights at the left top part of the image, the shape of the light on the wall (EDIT : Oh after more attention i guess it is caustics from the fixture?). I think you should turn them off and add mini spot lights on the tiles, to light the work plane? it would light this part of the scene and would create a contrast between natural light on the left and artificial on the right.
Nice JOB! and nice furniture!
qomop
nice image and nice view.
personnaly i like the contrast between the black tiles and the white walls, mixed with some little touch of orange. nice color composition job
my only regrets are the 3 lights at the left top part of the image, the shape of the light on the wall (EDIT : Oh after more attention i guess it is caustics from the fixture?). I think you should turn them off and add mini spot lights on the tiles, to light the work plane? it would light this part of the scene and would create a contrast between natural light on the left and artificial on the right.
Nice JOB! and nice furniture!
qomop
PS : Less is more --MVDRPibuz wrote: You know, i love minimalism..
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