First living room scene
First living room scene
Right now, the furniture looks like clay, I know..
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1. The tiles don't really fit in a living room tbh.
2. Is that a metal garbage can next to the couch?
3. The walls need work, and possibly a trim at the bottom.
4. I would make the lamp completely in chrome/metal. The base is fine, but I'd make the top part something else, glass or I don't know.
5. Right now the table looks like it's floating? (same thing for the lamp)
6. Lighting looks fake, it's too uniform, and the camera point of view is imo too high.
Uh yeah that about sums it up. As for the clay furniture issue, I do think it comes from the fact that you modeled the couches in one shot. Am I correct? you extruded a cube multiple times until you got the right shape (with subsurf or some other similar subdivision). I would suggest modeling it in multiple pieces and then joining them together (if sketchup allows it).
2. Is that a metal garbage can next to the couch?
3. The walls need work, and possibly a trim at the bottom.
4. I would make the lamp completely in chrome/metal. The base is fine, but I'd make the top part something else, glass or I don't know.
5. Right now the table looks like it's floating? (same thing for the lamp)
6. Lighting looks fake, it's too uniform, and the camera point of view is imo too high.
Uh yeah that about sums it up. As for the clay furniture issue, I do think it comes from the fact that you modeled the couches in one shot. Am I correct? you extruded a cube multiple times until you got the right shape (with subsurf or some other similar subdivision). I would suggest modeling it in multiple pieces and then joining them together (if sketchup allows it).
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lookin nice! that furniture looks real blocky n it looks like your living room is the size of a gymnasium! pull the walls in, maybe drop the ceiling along the edge of the wall for a bulkhead and put in some recessed lighting or something.
a nice chandelier would look good hovering over the table maybe...
good luck!
a nice chandelier would look good hovering over the table maybe...
good luck!
flip through some websites on interior magazines for inspiration if you are really wanting something realistic. you can't really leave anything out if it would be in a real living room. also, looking at the arms on your chairs, they look molded instead of sewn, should be a crease there.
and you wouldn't really need an exr and sunlight, unless you had a window to see the exr through.
what happened to the lampshade?
and you wouldn't really need an exr and sunlight, unless you had a window to see the exr through.
what happened to the lampshade?
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